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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : new poetry



beautiful girld
26-09-2007, 08:52 PM
I hope to enjoy with a list of poetry who my friend wrote it

better than you


We could be better if we working on
But she doesn't want me look so strong
She think that I still child with no grown
But I will be the same with all frown


She wants me to laugh when she like
She wants me to cry when she fight
Like a statue in her mind
But all these things couldn't be right

Hold on hold on I could be a statue in your mind
But not a broken one in your sight
I will made up my mind and stop your smile
And that's gonna make me satisfy

But I'm not gonna be like you and work the way you do
In front of you I will be better than you
You will be my previous bad mood
And I will be the generous if your improve


By
wala

beautiful girld
27-09-2007, 03:49 AM
شكلوا ماحدا عجبوا الشعر...

يعني مانكمل القائمة...

لا تحسسوني انو الشعر مو حلو:crieng:

Try To Reach
27-09-2007, 09:53 PM
Hold on hold on I could be a statue in your mind
But not a broken one in your sight

such verse ,, i like it
I do appreciate poems sister
thanx

and waiting for more

naji
29-09-2007, 05:51 AM
fantastic . I'm eager for more

Daleen
17-11-2007, 10:12 AM
u R the best go a head dear
nice poem and waiting for more

shy lady
20-10-2010, 04:51 AM
thanx alot

anabyla
30-10-2010, 10:12 PM
thanxxxxxx