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SIZE="4"]Is it love a mistake?
If it is, What s the correct?
To live without love
As stone?
One mistake.i did
Changed my view to world
Gave me wings to fly
High, high into the moon
This mistake , teach me,
How to live, how to smile
Full me heart by happiness.
With spring roses and songs
Cure all wounds , with one touch
Change my tears to unique diamonds
One mistake I did,
A promise to keep my heart is beating
My soul to rest between love palms
One mistake, iam not regret
To keep doing for ever and so on
Live to love or love to live
A question which one comes first?

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thank you very great lines

full of honest feelings

love never ever would be a mistake


appreciate your writing^^

Dear Sis

May Allah protect you

a very very very wonderful lines

:smile (40):

its contain a sweet meanings

but if you ask me

I'll say

that we have nothing to do

sometimes

love attack our hearts

so

what ever we do we can not avoid the truth of love

:smile (92):

May Allah protect my weak heart



Many Thanks To You

thanks for reading and for these sweet comments

One mistake,,I'll never regret it
To keep doing for ever and so on
Love to live or live to love
Nice lines honey
Keep it up
waiting for more

Thanks dear lost for reading it and for your nice words

nice lines

keep up the good work

waiting for more

thanks for reading and your nice comment

b e a u t i f u l

thanx for these high class lines

full of meanings and full of love
thanks so much for the topic

eastrenrose

Pretty good

except for some grammatical mistakes

I loved the feelings expressed within the lines

Thanks brother

Tank you my dear sister
the lines are so beautiful and sensative
I have may short words and essays and i want a literture specialist in English to correct it for me is there anybody here?

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة BloumagrieT

eastrenrose

Pretty good

except for some grammatical mistakes

I loved the feelings expressed within the lines

Thanks brother

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Thanks dear Bloumagrie
I appreciate you advice alot. Anshala i will take it
:smile (74):by the way Iam sister

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dannon

Tank you my dear sister
the lines are so beautiful and sensative
I have may short words and essays and i want a literture specialist in English to correct it for me is there anybody here?

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Thanks for reading it,
i hope if i can help you ,but you can puplish your work in English club as i do , and members here they will help you