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  1. #1
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    تصحيح مقال ..

    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

    كل عام انتم بالف خير ..
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    كتبت مقاله عن الفروق بين الحياه في المدينه والحياه في القريه



    There are many differences between life in the village and city life .This difference is like distinction between earth and sky
    Some of us prefer the life of the city instead of the village and some people prefer to live in the village instead of city,
    There are a lot of facilities for people in the city and they have more opportunities for working.

    life where Live in the village quieter than living in the city.
    In the city, there are a lot of factories and cars that occur nuisance and pollution of the environment. On the contrary, in the village where there are a lot of farms which help to soften the atmosphere. And no need for the car in the village.
    In the city may have all it wants from markets, hospitals, schools and universities on the contrary of the village based on agriculture and traditional medicine. This feature makes people leave the villages to live in cities.
    In the city there are a lot of people it is hard to recognize them all. But few people in the village and everyone knows each other, leading to increase social networking between people.
    Many crimes in the city and is difficult to identify the offender.
    While a few crimes in the village because everyone knows each other.

    On the other hand there are a lot of similarities between living in the city or live in the village.
    All of the people of the village and people of the city rise up early to do their jobs.
    People in the village are standing up to work on farms and grazing sheep in the city while working in factories, businesses and schools etc.

    At the end. Life in the city or village you need to work and will not be an easy life because you live in a favorite spot for you without a job.
    I prefer to live in the village but lived in the city to study
    And would benefit from the availability of a lot of features that do not exist in the village.


    صححوا لي المقال
    ركزوا عالقرامر و علامات الترقيم :(
    رحم الله إمرءاً اهدى إلي عيوبي

    مشكورين


    bp039

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    رد: تصحيح مقال ..

    There are many differences between life in the village and the city life .These differences are like the distinction between both the earth and sky. Some of us prefer the life of the city instead of the village , some people prefer to live in the village instead of city.There are lots of facilities for people in the city and they have more opportunities to find the perfect job. life where I live ,in the village, is quieter than living in a city.In the city, there are lots of factories and cars that occur nuisance and pollution of the environment. On the contrary, in the village there are a lot of farms which help to soften the atmosphere. And no need for the cars in the village because isn't as wide as the city.In the city we may have whatever we want from markets, hospitals, schools and universities and on the contrary of the village which based on agriculture and traditional medicine. This feature makes people leave the villages to live in cities.In the city there are a lot of people, it is hard to recognize them all. But in the opposite there are a few people in the village and everyone knows each other, leading to increase social networking between people. Many crimes happen in the city and is difficult to identify the offender. While a few crimes in the village and it's easier to know the doer because everyone knows each other.On the other hand there are a lot of similarities between living in the city or living in the village. All of the people whom are in the village and the people who live in the city wakes up early to do their jobs. People in the village wakes up to work on farms and grazing sheep, in the city they work in factories, businesses and schools ...etc.finally, living in the city or in the village you eventually will need to find a job and it won't be easy to find one in your place so you would look for one around the cities near you.I prefer to live in the village but I am actually living in a city to study, there are lots of availability and features that doesn't exist in the village.





    موفق أخوي :)

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    الله يجزاك الخير اختي مووون ويحقق لك كل أمنياتك ..

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