Help me

[»‏ αиgεl•]

Peace be upon you

How are you

I hope that you will be fine


i very like to write in English
but i feel my writing is Dry
and Without feelings
i wish to write Poem or song
advice me

For information i am 17 years old
and I like English so much

[prettyالسبهه]

hi Angel
first of all welcome here
and about ur writing

u should know what u wanna to write about I mean theme 1_
use the short phrase it so easy 2_
choice the words which have the same sound such door - poor -sure and put them as rhyme3_
then build the poem a many stanza such..
...........
............

...........
.............
..............

every three lines called stanza
and u can write stanza have 4 lines
good luck honey and am waiting ur poem soon

[آنسهOoفكره]

=)
αиgεl
Heey

With our pretty advices u'll know ur way to the start point..
Simply dear express ur feelings let them flow easily

if u cant think of anything just write on the paper

my mind is blank
my mind is blank


over & over agin untill a new thought comes into ur mind
..
Best wishes ..
We'll wait to read a poem by u
Let us not wait too long

[»‏ αиgεl•]

thank you for all
i will try And tell you about the result


i have a simple problem:
i do not have many of vocabulary
to i can write words which have the same sound
=(
someone advice me to read more and more but i do not know what i should read can you help me

[prettyالسبهه]

there is simple nice poem in the topic in English club
(come and share your won poem................)
open it and read some poem
its so nice and easy
and about vocab u can use dictionary and u can ask me if
u faced some problem
good luck

[محمد عواد]

Really and first of all, I think your writing is very good or even excellent
according to your age.
For the advice I think you should read alot , in any section or writing types YOU LIKE
novels, poems and essays any thing you can read it and LIKE IT in English .
I think one of the most important thing in writing is MAKE IT SHORT AS YOU CAN.
You know Miss angel Nietzsche once said :
" I wish I can say in 10 sentences what other could say in a book"
Another one - I don't remember his/ her name maybe Lincoln - wrote a long letter to his friend
by the end of the letter he wrote a short note " please, forgive me for making it too long because
i don't have enough time to make it short ..!"

Remember that.

Thanks

[»‏ αиgεl•]

thanks for all
this is some from my writing
i wait your Comment
and advices

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in a dark night , when it is raining
i opened the window,look at the moon and talk with myself
the moon is lucky because my love can see him ,and he visit my love every night !!! i wish to fly to the moon for one night to see my love and return to my room again
the moon listened to me and say
when everyone sleep, i Wake up
i live alone, no one with me
can i be your friend ?? i asked the moon
of course i will wait you every night
thank you , good night
i closed the window ,go to my bed and sleep

[آنسهOoفكره]

Very nice
Angel..

=)

The theme of this short lines was lovely .
Keep on writing dear .
the most important thing is to write for the sake of the joy that u feel when u write


but we can called this a short poem
U know cuz of the rhythm.
. I think these lines are ought to be called
Katrh خاطره ^^"""
Or a free writing I dnt know really what to called such writings.

do any one of you know what to called it ?


But I think it still lovely & charming in its way.
Very excellent start
Angel..


keep the advices
of mR
محمد عواد
always in your mind..

Good luck sis
.

[smack]

If you really like English you will succeed in improve your language.
Good luck my sister