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this is two of my poems which i hope you read and comment on them
)be attention to the grammatical rules as i'm a beginner)
pleazzzz i want the truth nothing but the truth as this is the first participate from me in this beautiful forum
hope you find them enjoyable.
She made me mad
Where's she hide
I asked an old ghost
Where's she sit almost
It gave me the guide
And I seek in all side
It was too late
When I found the answer
It was unfortunate
As my love to her is disaster
I can't see her again
That made me unhappy
Her love is a great pain
Which increase my worry
How can I express
I crave to hug and kiss,
Whom took over my heart
And draw herself in as an art
Before my tears flow
Know that she is++ yoyo ++
Every day your love is grow
Nothing can stop its blow
the other one
]I hate you really, really I do
As you try to deceive me yoyo
Go out and shut the door
Don't talk to me again
As there's no need to explain
When I love you I was misdo
I hate you really, really I do
As you try to annoy me yoyo
Forget me and Good bye
If you don't apologyI
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