My Poem ^___^

[M.o_o.N]

last week when I was studying "some Arabic course" that I hate most

I just couldn't stop myself not to write some verses looooool

so what do you think???

I know it's just words mixed together but at least it does have a meaning FOR me ^_^

Waiting for your comments



Hold me tight
I can start a fight
I know it's my right
To do some bites

They came to our kingdom
Stole our freedom
And took our dome

We will take Palastine back
And it won't be a crack
So be ready to hack
Those faker Jews


Renoa

[فـيصـل]

We will take Palastine back
And it won't be a crack
So be ready to hack
Those faker Jews








what's a great description for a statement we live in

........

renoa u are magnificant

please keep on.......u will be creative in near future
i'm pretty sure


yours
faisal

[M.o_o.N]

hey :)

thank you so much that is soo nice from you bro

have a good day

[The tolerant]

nice work dear sister keep on
God bless you

[M.o_o.N]

حمدونة

thanks dear
glad you loved it :)

[BloumagrieT]

Renoa

Long time no see dearest sister

Hope you're having a good time

Your poem is good

You should keep practicing for more improvement

Bless you dear

By the way



Green suits you more sister

[M.o_o.N]

hehehe though I wann be Pink one day ^_~

thank you dear

Inshaa Allah one day I may become ShakesRenoa lol

[gentel lady]

thank you my dear
Its very nice
I think to be afamous writer
God bless you

[let it b]

nice poem
thanx for sharing it

[M.o_o.N]

gentel lady

let it b

hey :) thanks both
that is very nice

am gonna write more Inshaa Allah

[I care]

its percious poem and very effctive
u have a great talent keep on mi dear.