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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية sa3d9
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    Awt10 but always another day is gone

    The followings are the header of my verse and the verse its self
    I wrote it a year ago , because I felt disappointment at that time
    .
    On that night , and at scary moments
    I was sitting alone , my computer and I in horrible conditions
    no one was at home . I m not afraid of being alone ,but always another day is gone
    .
    Every day comes
    I wish to do something different, something new
    to make many things in my mind
    BUT , always another new day GONE
    ....Gone with wind

    .
    WITH KIND REGARDS
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة sa3d9 ; 08-04-2009 الساعة 11:19 PM سبب آخر: no one replayed
    plan ur future , there was no sea when Noah built his ship

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية sa3d9
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    Question رد: but always another day is gone

    two days and 20 users read this topic with 0 reaplyed for my first writing
    it is a shame actually
    shame on me
    buz this proves that i m bad writer
    or
    i m not welcomed here
    anyways
    it doesnt matter
    but
    for u
    try to read and write ur opinion even for ppl u dont know
    try to write things which r not THNX and so on
    try to be you
    and only u
    by the way
    i m leavin
    to forums which respect their users
    to forums which have really active members
    whom read and share opinions and ideas
    at the end , i hope u accept my honesty and not to delete my replay
    with best regards
    sa3d
    plan ur future , there was no sea when Noah built his ship

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    رد: but always another day is gone

    you most welcome

    it's first time for me to read such nice words
    first of all i wish you the better
    then, your words actually so nice although they are sad

    any way i like them alot you are so nice writer


    may Allah enlighten your way

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية BloumagrieT
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    Peace upon you brother

    sa3d9


    First of all, you're most welcome brother to the forum

    I hope you'd be more pacient cause not commenting on your topic doesn't mean

    that you're words are not liked

    On the contrary, they are good and I like them

    Wish you all the best


    /

    " اللهم استعملني في طاعتك "

    /

    أستغفر الله العظيم التواب الرحيم لذنبي
    وللمسلمين والمسلمات و المؤمنين والمؤمنات
    الأحياء منهم والأموات إلى يوم الدين



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    انجليزي فعال الصورة الرمزية special miss
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    رد: but always another day is gone

    Hi, Sa3d9!
    I've read your nice lines and, guess what, I LIKED THEM!
    You have the ability and the well
    Please, write more
    .
    Tomorrow isn't only another day; it is also another chance!

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    sa3d9

    Hi ,Someone with such a great way of writing like you should NOT be sad . I like your writing indeed . You have got a great taste of writing . Though ,it is the first time for me to read something for you ,but believe me that you are such a wonderful writer .I WISH if I could read something else for you over here . Wish you all the best of luck . Accept my passing by though it is little bit late . Thanks again

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