Take me wherever you go I don't care where as long as I'm with you.
It is outstanding, the time that I spend with you.
When I am with you, I feel like I am a princess.
The one who have all the shininess.
When you tell me, "you are the queen of my heart".
You captured my heart, what can I say it is "just your art."
Running and hiding with you is a dangerous step, which I am willing to take.
No matter how hard is it, it would be for me like a piece of cake.
You can see the happiness from the lines of my face.
On the time, you meet me on that old place.
You can see my tear that wept my fear.
I was scared form the idea that you will not be here.
Your smile, your touch brings the good memories that we spend together.
You have not change at all from the last moment we saw each other.
I thanked God for each moment that you spend with me.
I wanted you to be the last person to see.
Until now, I do not know how did I manage to live without you.
All I know that it was hard on me as well as on you.
Without you, I have nothing to share.
Just take me anywhere I really do not care.
First of all let me welcome you dear sis
It thrills me whenever I see a new member here
A member who chose to begin his / her participations in the forum through this section in particular
Regarding the lines you wrote
I found them easygoing they are smooth and flowing
I just didn't like the idea of being submissive
I dislike that kind of love
Excuse me dear for my poor judging
I'm no expert in criticizing writings,it's just my opinion
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
hi
the words are so nice
but you have not said who is the writer
IS it yours??
thanx
Nice words :)
very nice
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thanx
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I wanted you to be the last person to see
joilo
your lines are as deep as your eye
they are costless lines
thank alot for taking me to the world of majic honey
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