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    Beware: Do Not Read This Poem
    by



    //////

    tonite, thriller was
    about an old woman, so vain she
    surrounded herself with

    many mirrors
    it got so bad that finally she
    locked herself indoors & her
    whole life became the


    mirrors
    one day the villagers broke
    into her house, but she was too
    swift for them. she disappeared


    into a mirror
    each tenant who bought the house
    after that, lost a loved one to

    the old woman in the mirror:

    first a little girl

    then a young woman

    then the young woman's husband
    the hunger of this poem is legendary
    it has taken in many victims
    back off from this poem
    it has drawn in your feet
    back off from this poem
    it has drawn in your legs

    back off from thias poem
    it is a greedy mirror
    you are into this poem. from


    the waist down
    nobody can hear you can they?
    this poem has had you up to here

    belch
    this poem aint got no manners
    you cant call out from this poem
    relax now & go with this poem
    move & roll on to this poem
    do not resist this poem
    this poem has your eyes
    this poem has his head
    this poem has his arms
    this poem has his fingers
    this poem has his fingertips

    this poem is the reader & the
    reader the poem

    statistic: the US bureau of missing persons re-


    ports that in 1968 over 100,000 people

    disappeared leaving no solid clues

    nor trace only
    a space in the lives of their friends

    /////

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QovAkEt6Fcs


    Style

    “Beware: Do Not Read This Poem” is written in free verse, which means there is no established pattern of rhyme and it is devoid of regular stanzas and meter

    Themes

    Isolation

    The old woman introduced in the first stanza gets caught up in the mirrors and isolates herself from others. The mind-set of the villagers who break into her house is not explained; they could merely be checking up on her out of concern for her well-being, or her strange behavior may have provoked them into a confrontation. The old woman is so interested in avoiding the villagers that she escapes into a mirror. We cannot be certain whether the mirrors caused the old woman’s isolation or simply contributed to it, but, whatever the case, the woman, once in the mirror world, appears to have found that she is alone there — that she no longer has her reflection to keep her company. In the mirror world, the woman is probably alone and that could be the reason she steals people from the other side — to keep her company. Poems are similar to the woman’s mirrors in that they attempt to absorb readers. A reader who immerses him- or herself in poetry can become withdrawn from others and, in that isolation, look desperately for some connection in the words of others..

    Perception

    The old woman who disappeared into the mirror world snatches only young people from the real world. Alone and unreflected inside the mirror, she now desires the companionship of younger people. Or perhaps it is less a need for companionship than a selfish desire to surround herself with youth and deceive herself into thinking that she, herself, is young. She may even have deluded herself about her age before she disappeared into the mirror, based on her isolation and her obsession with her reflection. Forever looking into mirrors allows one to forget how much one is changing and getting older, because one is not able to assimilate all the small changes. When you have not seen someone for a long time, they look much older, whereas viewing your own image in the mirror everyday, you appear to almost stay the same age.



    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    English Club Supervisor الصورة الرمزية ● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
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    wow
    this is the first time I read a poem makes me want to write a poem
    I wish
    ^_^
    for that poet, I write these simple words
    and I know they are not as good as his

    the poem is you
    and you are the poem
    she gave you her soul you reflect her downfalls
    missing
    finding
    lost in space
    of a poet his poem stanzas not in trace
    I follow a figure of her past
    trapped in a mirror of his thought
    !!weak, alone is that his decision to make
    ?where her words, to be heard
    ?where her place, to be found
    in a mirror or in his eyes
    Anyway
    poor that person who thinks
    that his/ her value
    is defined by his age
    .
    .
    Thank you sooooo much
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆ ; 22-02-2015 الساعة 10:23 PM
    اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆ مشاهدة المشاركة
    wow
    this is the first time I read a poem makes me want to write a poem
    I wish
    ^_^
    for that poet, I write these simple words
    and I know they are not as good as his

    the poem is you
    and you are the poem
    she gave you her soul you reflect her downfalls
    missing
    finding
    lost in space
    of a poet his poem stanzas not in trace
    I follow a figure of her past
    trapped in a mirror of his thought
    !!weak, alone is that his decision to make
    ?where her words, to be heard
    ?where her place, to be found
    in a mirror or in his eyes
    Anyway
    poor that person who thinks
    that his/ her value
    is defined by his age
    .
    .
    Thank you sooooo much

    honestly , it is amazing
    I enjoyed it as
    I did enjoy the
    originl poem
    Bravoooooo

    .

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    I came to write comment on ACME's topic
    but I found a WOW & a great poem for
    ● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆
    ,
    Reed wrote a great lyrics about fearing the man of getting old
    and how some of them deal with that.
    .
    .
    .
    Thank you my teacher, I really enjoyed reading it
    " أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
    ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
    .
    كفارة المجلس :
    " سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "

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