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[ail1100]

السلام عليكم
اخواني انا طالب في الكليه الدورة المكثفه
وعندنا برقرافات كثيره
انا اعرف اكتب بس مشكه اخطا تركيب الجمله
هذا البرقراف
ابغى التصحيح لو سحمتم
MyFather
MyFather is nasser.He works a teacher. He is 45.He lives in flat in Buraidah. He is married and he has 4 children. He likes swimming and reading. He speak English and Arabic. He has a car.
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وفيه البراقرف هذا
my name is IBRAHIM. I am student. I am 20year.I am single. I am live in flat in Buraidah. I am study English in college.I am like Swimming and Reading.I am speak English and Arabic.I have a car.

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[ail1100]

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MyFather
MyFather is Nasser.He works as a teacher. He is 45 years old .He lives in a flat in Buraidah. He is married and he has 4 children. He likes swimming and reading. He speaks English and Arabic. He has a car . we always spend a beautiful time together . he advises me. I like him too much .

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my name is Ibraheem . I am student. I am 20 years old .I am single. I live in a flat in Buraidah. I study English language in the college.I like Swimming and Reading, and speak English with Arabic.I have a beautiful car . and I hope to be a doctor .

[ail1100]

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