تصحيح جملة

[سوسو3010]

الله يرضى عليكم احد يصحح لي الجملة هذي

if you lives without goal,you will loss your identity and there is nothing new to be done in in your life

[kasandra]

الله يرضى عليكم احد يصحح لي الجملة هذي

if you lives without goal,you will loss your identity and there is nothing new to be done in in your life

كيفك اختي .. رح احاول اساعد واتمنى اذا كان عندي غلط احد يصححلي
you will loss your identity and there is nothing to be done , if you live without goals

[Fatmagul]

[SIZE="4"]There's a mistake..it's:You will lose your life..../SIZE]