Somewhere under the sun

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

The scene
"At the train station"
It was almost midnight when the train finally came
Although it was midnight, but it was a busy night at the station, people
Of different ages were standing, carrying their bags, babies and even their pets all of them were waiting for the train

At the corner, not very far from them there were two people standing
A man and a woman
The woman was crying, her face turned to be as summer sun
Burning with emotion
" will you be there ? " she Whispers , refusing to let his hand go
He looked at her hand as she squeezed his,, raised his eyes to meet hers
" I will be there " don’t worry he said
Tears covers her face while she was holding him "promise me or I will never let you go
He smiled to her and hold her back" I promise
" come on bro the train is going to leave"
His young brother screamed "
" "go I will be with you in a moment" he said
I will be ok honey , and I will wait for you just trust me on that"
He said
" all I want from you is to take good care of your self
and dont be so sad when I leave, coz as I said I will take good care of myself just for you, so
will you give me hope honey and show me your lovely smile"
he added
she smiled at him and take off her gloves
and put them in his hands"
" Just to remember your promise of coming back for me
she smiled
" Adam was a soldier who is going to leave to war and his wife Eve was so worried
And inorder to let him go he promised her to meet her when the war is over under their
apple tree at their home town"

" hurry up brother" his brother shout
he hold her one more time and left

she watched him leaving with great pain
she kneel down and pray in silence nothing but her tears sharing her pain for her " love" to be safe
.
.
serenity

[بحر الأماان]

Oh
So sweet
Thanks for sharing
Serenity

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Oh
So sweet
Thanks for sharing
Serenity

بحر الأماان

you are most welcome dear
.

[ACME]

It is really a touching scene of farewell & departure
You used your vivid imagination greatly to describe all
the human feelings . Your writing narrative style seized the
reader from the beginning . Tears can say
more than words can do as you described Eve's inner
feelings .Truly , you are gifted . I enjoyed reading it
Ten Out Of Ten

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

It is really a touching scene of farewell & departure

You used your vivid imagination greatly to describe all
the human feelings . Your writing narrative style seized the
reader from the beginning . Tears can say
more than words can do as you described Eve's inner
feelings .Truly , you are gifted . I enjoyed reading it

Ten Out Of Ten

ACME

Ten Out Of Ten
when I saw it I felt proud
happy, thank you so much
your comments mean alot to me

^_^

[روبينآ]

so touching dear

thank you

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

so touching dear


thank you

روبينآ

you are most welcome

[Faith!!]

Wow
So beautiful
Thank you

[7mmood]

wow


it's amazing story

but i wanna ask you

[

did you write it ?

[rose rani]

amazing writing

I do enjoy reading

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Wow
So beautiful
Thank you

Faith!!;

you are most welcome
.
.

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

wow

it's amazing story

but i wanna ask you

[

did you write it ?

7mmood
I am so glad that you liked it
and yes I did write it
^_^
.
.

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

amazing writing

I do enjoy reading

rose rani

thank you sweetie for being here
and for your encourging comments
May Allah keep you always safe
.
.

[Beauty]

great
thanks sweety

[Noura81]

thanks for sharing

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

great
thanks sweety

Beauty
you are most welcome dear

[IAM LEGEND]

There is not enough words to describe my admiration ... thanx darling >> u r a very talented person

keep going

,...IT IS REALLY HARD TO LET GO SOMEONE WE LOVE]