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الموضوع: Suspense

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
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    Sm121 Suspense


    In “Suspense”,
    a young woman struggles with her fear of the
    unknown; but how far will she go to find out
    the truth?

    listen to the sory

    here is the link

    http://www.mediafire.com/download/ml...6/suspence.rar
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    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
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    رد: Suspense


    Here is the text of the story
    /////

    The wind howled eerily through the broken glass.
    ...And the flashlight went out — right then and
    there. She had known this was going to happen.
    But now? Did it have to happen now, precisely
    when Estelle was alone in the abandoned
    house? With no light, there was no choice but
    to move about in the dark as best she could.
    Estelle’s birthday had begun so well. As every
    year, her parents had planned a bonfire in the
    woods. She always had s’mores instead of
    birthday cake, and instead of blowing out candles,
    she blew out a flaming marshmallow on a
    stick. This year, on her 14th birthday, she and
    her friends had stayed by the bonfire after all
    the adults had gone to bed.
    An hour or so later, the conversation had died
    down, and Estelle was feeling pleasantly sleepy
    by the fire. She was thinking that perhaps she
    could manage to eat another marshmallow.
    Then suddenly she heard a scream. She looked
    round and was shocked to find herself alone.
    What had happened? Were Estelle’s friends
    playing a trick on her? Had a madman abducted
    them perhaps, or had all the ghost stories
    around the campfire made her believe that she
    was hearing noises?
    There was no way to know. And now, there was
    only one way to find out.
    Slowly and quietly, she felt her way along the
    wall to the door. She knew this house well
    enough to avoid the creaky floorboard. She had
    hoped to stay here, hidden under a blanket in
    the upstairs room until the sun came up. But
    with no light... No, she couldn’t bear it.
    It was cold. She had considered bringing the
    blanket with her and wrapping it around her
    shoulders, but she had decided against it.
    Carefully, she eased the door open. All was
    quiet. She could still choose to turn around, to
    close the door, return to the blanket and wait
    until the morning. But she knew she must keep
    going. She could not stop. She needed a light,
    and she thought she knew where to find one.
    Her heart beating fast, she tiptoed toward the
    staircase. What made houses so frightening in
    the dark, she wondered. By daylight, she knew
    it would look ordinary. But now... now, just
    enough moonlight shone in through the windows
    to throw shadows into places where they
    shouldn’t be.
    One step at a time, she went down the stairs. So
    far, so good. She jumped, as a clock in another
    room began to chime. One, two, three, she
    counted. The sun would be rising soon. There
    would be little sleep for her tonight.
    A coyote howled in the distance, and she shivered.
    What had happened at the bonfire? The
    only thing Estelle had been sure of was the terror.
    She had run, and run, and run. When she
    heard another scream, she had run even faster.
    And then she had seen the roof of the house
    silhouetted against the moonlit sky. How many
    people knew about the key hidden above the
    door frame? Estelle had locked the door behind
    her. She hadn’t known at the time that most of
    the windows were already broken.
    Somehow she had to get back to the upstairs
    room. First, though, she needed a light. But
    where was she to find a light here? Perhaps the
    radio in the kitchen might still have batteries
    in it. Holding her arms out in front of her, she
    slowly walked through the living room, past the
    dining room. Almost there.
    She found the radio in the corner of the kitchen.
    She felt along its back and flipped the battery
    compartment open. Yes! She could see the glint
    of two AAs. She stuffed them into her pocket.
    She walked back quietly, first through the living
    room, then up the stairs. She closed the
    door behind her softly and curled up again
    underneath the blanket. The flashlight was
    there, right next to the book. She slid the batteries
    into the compartment, moved the switch
    to “on” and sighed with relief when a bright
    stream of light appeared.
    Soon she would know how Estelle’s story ended.
    She picked up the book, found her place
    and continued reading.
    The wind howled eerily through the broken
    glass...

    /////

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    رد: Suspense

    I truly entered the atmosphere of story
    suspense, ghosts ,screams and I even felt her situations in this night
    and walk beside her waiting for someone to attack her
    until I felt relieved when she turn on the light of flashlight
    ,
    the writer and even the woman who tells the story
    succeed in sending those feelings to the reader
    .
    .
    .
    Thank you my teacher
    " أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
    ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
    .
    كفارة المجلس :
    " سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
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    رد: Suspense

    بحر الأماان
    you are truly right
    It got the reader caught from the beginning to the end
    The climax is the top moment of suspense
    I appreciate your reply
    Thanks a lot

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    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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