Hallucination 2

[Try To Reach]

Hallucination 2


: i named it

( the ghost ,the body and me !! )




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Oh
finally I saw you !
Please ..
try to reach that body
Try to move it forwards
Its suffocated my overburdened chest
I want to leave peacefully
I've never planed to hurt anyone
and i want to leave calmly
In spite of all these interlocked doors
But I have to move on
And carry on
Till i find my way out
Please
Please
Are you listening !!
Oh

What's wrong
God help
am i hearing
"Shivering sounds "
Groaning""
"Children laughing "
Are they really children ?
reader do you read me
Mess in my place
What's happening to my heavy loaded mind !!
Hey please
PLEASE
Please; move that body
Its bothering me all the time
And prevents me from being thinking !
Tell me
Are you human ?
..............
Why I can see you !! ??
And you cant respond to me !! ??
..............
He promptly trod that body
and get to the other side
He returned so aggressively
and ripped it apart
in front of my obtuse eyes
Oh God
Am I to suffer or it will raise
That strenuous sights
I saw them many times
all nights
it smites
in a powerless mind
but tonight
its about to kill
an injured
an ignored soul !!
that once was important and [glow=FF6600]bright[/glow]
by God !
That ghost returned
He is definitely not vain
He has sth to gain
But that body still remained
As a mountain
And that ghost drained
But appeared again
in lateen
And I'm swimming in a sea of
PAIN
among phantasm and grained

[Meant To be]

What a wonderful writing,
I really like the way you write and about the Rhymes, don't tell me about it?!!!
Great, great and great dear Alshareef, I enjoy reading both, Part 1 & 2
Thanks for sharing it with us
Keep it up man

[lingo]

I can't say much
I never had such
I tried once upon a time
But couldn't find the stuff to rhyme
But I can say this
Life is a hallucinating Mess
Don't ever stop
Till you get higher or drop
Feel with the mind and think with emotion
Dive deep in every idea and notion
Doesn't matter if it is the worst or the best
Life is just a deep breath in a lonely chest

[Try To Reach]

What a wonderful writing,
I really like the way you write and about the Rhymes, don't tell me about it?!!!
Great, great and great dear Alshareef, I enjoy reading both, Part 1 & 2
Thanks for sharing it with us
Keep it up man

you are welcome dear Don
thanx for passing and caring
i like you

:36_4_12:

[Try To Reach]

I can't say much
I never had such
I tried once upon a time
But couldn't find the stuff to rhyme
But I can say this
Life is a hallucinating Mess
Don't ever stop
Till you get higher or drop
Feel with the mind and think with emotion
Dive deep in every idea and notion
Doesn't matter if it is the worst or the best
Life is just a deep breath in a lonely chest

what a poet Lingo
Good for you man
I like the way you responded to my thread
and you are almost right on all what you said above
thank you my friend

[lingo]

it seems it is only me and you Alshareef interested in the forgotten art of Hallucination.For me it is more than enough to find you here

[enigma]

Good work

Keep it up

[T.Sultan]

alshareef ,

I do believe that you have what it takes to be a good writer. You really make up beautiful writings and you always come up with new and beneficial posts. God bless ya , dear brother. Please, keep up the good work and I'm waiting for your further posts. Please, have a nice day.

[Try To Reach]

it seems it is only me and you Alshareef interested in the forgotten art of Hallucination.For me it is more than enough to find you here

me too dear best Lingo
I'll be always waiting for your Hallucinations too
So hurry up let's see what do you have couple of years , months or days ago
let's see your happy or gloomy experiences
- you see dear this style of writing - if i'm really using it in the correct way
spreads in this beautiful site it might brings to it more ambiguity and so others might get dizzy and rather not to
comment on it

and leave it as it is forgotten look " i have written some of these pieces somewhere out
in others forums but i found no one says truthfully he likes it
but you
thanx my best friend

Don't ever stop
Till you get higher or drop
Feel with the mind and think with emotion
Dive deep in every idea and notion
Doesn't matter if it is the worst or the best
Life is just a deep breath in a lonely chest

I

will CARRY ON dear and you will have a new bad Hallucination from me
so soon
I was thinking of this stanza of yours
it was so veracious and so expressive especially the last part of it
how marvelous depiction it shows
when you said : Life is just a deep breath in a lonely chest
God bless you dear Lingo

[Try To Reach]

Good work
Keep it up

My Pleasure Madam
stay warmhearted

[Try To Reach]

alshareef ,
I do believe that you have what it takes to be a good writer. You really make up beautiful writings and you always come up with new and beneficial posts. God bless ya , dear brother. Please, keep up the good work and I'm waiting for your further posts. Please, have a nice day.

hey man thanx for flattering me i do appreciate your interest
its my pleasure you liked my work
thanx my best friend
stay tuned

[lingo]

Take this Alshareef.

Eyes closed but not blind
See through with mind
Search the darkness
Reach the divine essence
The secret of being
Hidden in every scene
Touch the core
Open the mystery door
There you can be
I, you or he
Absorb the unknown
Mix day night and dawn
Loosen up the spirit
Beyond space time and limit
To grow up not old
To grab the knowledge and hold
And when you do
Open eyes and tell me who

[Try To Reach]

itchy , itchy
This is a direct guide to the real hallucination indeed
Dear lingo what a riddle we have here
I like it for sure pal thanx a lot
>> So its about human <<
either, You, he or me can have it I guess !!
but the problem is that hearts can never see through minds its rather mysterious ya buddy
but I do believe that it is The secret of being
If NOT it wouldn't be that easy to decode
Waiting

[Try To Reach]

I was a kid
At the time my father
was soldier
in the army of
jobless
>> I had no cheeks <<
They told me that
My cousin were among the dead
My older brother were exiled
The next one were prisoner
But the tear at my father's eye
Were a buried secret
He was superior despite the lowering
Yet; suddenly
I watched him crying like bereaved
I said :
My father what's happened ?
He said under his breath :
In a very lower and throaty voice ..
My son ,
The Commander of the Faithful !!
died !!…..
I pulled in a different direction
I said to myself :
I wonder if his death differs from others !! ??
Why my daddy is crying for him now
And he hasn't done so
for my close relatives !!
!!!!!
This is me
after all that long years…
I wish if I was my father
I was a kid
I didn't understand
The auspicious crying

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[Try To Reach]

Edited ....

[lingo]

derived from you Alshareef

He was a kid when father was jobless
Cousins were dead and brother in prison sleepless
He had no cheeks
Some thing his aunt still seeks
Once he saw a lonely tear in father’s eye
As a kid he wondered why
He had no answer or reply
But the scene engraved in mind
Buried deep in behind
Now he remembered the reason
For that sad season
It was the commander faithful’s death
Who took our last faithful breath
And left us to live in miserable shame
A life meant to be a cheating game.

[Try To Reach]

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thank you dear : Lingo

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[J.J]

WoOoOoOoOW
I really don't know what to say?.... I'm really impressed by you two {Alshareef &Lingo} .... You both have an amazing talent ... good for you ... keep up the good work ... God bless you ....

... Alshareef you seem very intrested in Hallucination .. be carefull brother...it could be dangerous ....hahahaha

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Hey ,, J.J
thanx for the SoOoO SoOoO High praise that it is
I'm really happy to hear that
you see

looooooooool
thanx a lot sister
and I will take that sweet advice for granted
by happy




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