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الموضوع: Scary Feeling

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Meant To be
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    Awt4 Scary Feeling

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    I used to compose poems, but what you're going to read here is considered as a conception

    It's the first time to write such a peice of writing,

    I hope you like it..
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    It's a scary feeling....
    To discover the death of your tongue,,,,
    when you need to talk....
    To discover the death of your heart,,,,
    when you need the love and the life....
    And you discover that you are all alone,,,,
    like the autumn's leaves, when you need others....
    It's such an arduous consciousness to handle,,,,
    which makes you feel like unimpressionable....
    Trying to face the truth, which is crystal clear,,,,
    However, all you face is something hardly appears....
    That makes your life up side down,,,,
    Moreover, your smile is turning into frown....


    It's worse than those handcuffs that shackled your both hands, though you're blameless,,,,
    In spite of doing all your best to satisfy others, yet you realize they're careless....


    Neither you are dead, nor you are alive,,,,
    hopelessly, struggling with great strife....
    catching your breath but you're capable to scream,,,,
    closing your eyes, it's still hidden beyond your dream....


    A sensation that words can't describe,,,,



    By Your Brother,
    Meant To Be

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية الغاليه
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    scary to death

    yet you're still alive

    to face the shadows of your fears with every breath you take



    Meant To be


    it's so great


    I like it so much....specially this line


    In spite of doing all your best to satisfy others, yet you realize they're careless....







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    Thank you for the indescribable piece of writing. I really like the way you composed the lines. It's really scarry feeling when you face the things you mentioned in bewteeen the lines. Stay cool , brother.

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    مميز الصورة الرمزية like Moon
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    Very Nice Poem
    its really scarry feeling
    &
    I Like Ur Way of composed the lines.
    Keep On
    My Allah Will Bless U Bro


    تــفارقــنا فــراق عيــون

    لكــن ... القلوب أحــباب .. تمنــيت الســعادة لـــكــ

    ولو معــ واحـــدِ ..... غيــــري,,

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Meant To be
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    الغالية,

    I'm so glad to see you the fisrt one who replied,

    Thanks so much for the encouragement

    I'm so greatful to you dear sister

    Thanks for passing by

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Meant To be
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    T.Sultan,

    I'm extremely happy for admiring my writing,

    Dear brother, your encouragement makes me realize that you are always there, I don't know how could I repay you

    Have a nice day

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Meant To be
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    Like Moon,

    I'm so happy to see you here

    Thanks so much dear sister for your words

    God bless ya, Amen

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية enigma
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    To find out the death of your tongue and your heart,to feel all alone while many are around you is truly an ugly feeling

    We can only escape it by tying ourselves to Allah

    Thanks brother for these beautiful lines
    عفوا ......!!

    حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!

    إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Meant To be
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    Enigma,

    I definitely agree and beleive in what you've said

    Thanks dear sister

    God bless you, Amen

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