Patchi,
First, let me scream out a big WOW, ain't funny at all what you composed, coz it's a little hard to find a person who can express his/her deep down feelings with a poem like you did. As I guess, it's your first one, right?
As for me I started composing such poems by using all my feelings and sensations, so I found who encourages me to go on, and that gave me a puch forward not to stop composing. So, here I am telling you not to stop writing poems, coz you're gifted, yes you are. Dear sister, you will remember my words later on when you compose more than one, so please don't ever think about ignoring such writings, improve your own writings every time you feel like writing, and I'm sure that one day you will write better than you imagine, even better than me
Regarding your question,
My heart beats in joy or sorrow, whenever I find any one who is happy, I feel the same, coz my heart starts beating, and I think it's kinda a reflection on me, when I see a smile on a child face or hear his/her cry, I feel that I'm the one who's responsible for that, though I'm not
Let me tell you something happend to me yesterday,
During a lecture, I was so upset and angry, my teacher was talking to me, I replied to him loudly with an angry voice, he didn't say a word, I felt that I hurt his feeling. I wanted to apologize right after the lecture but I couldn't, coz he was talking with another teacher, and I wanted to talk to him in private
I went home extremely upset. At night, I thought of calling him on his moblie and I did call him, coz I couldn't hold it anymore inside my heart, unfortunately, his moble was switched off, my heart started beating much more than any moment in my life, even I spent 2 hours trying to sleep.
In the next morning, which's this morning, after his lecture, I went directly to his office and I met him there, I told him about everything and I apologized to him, Look what did he say to me,
He said: Khalid bear in mind that I won't get upset from you whenever you say to me, coz I like you, he really made my day
Sorry for bothering you with my situation , but I wanted to share it with you all
Dear sister, please keep up the great work
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