goodbye

**Qween** · 24-12-2006, 03:30 AM

Goodbye

by Jami Kanapesky

Watching the stars
fade from the sky,
the leaves falling down,
the robin's last cry,
the grass turning brown,
I utter a sigh.
The hardest part
when watching love die,
is whispering softly
the final "goodbye".

**Aseel** · 24-12-2006, 01:13 PM

I utter a sigh

what a apinful sight is that one

is whispering softly
the final "goodbye

That would be the hardest moment in your life

To say goodbye to a ture love

Thanx sister for sharing the poem with us

**enigma** · 24-12-2006, 03:59 PM

Short yet meaningful

Thanks for sharing it

**Salsa** · 24-12-2006, 05:56 PM

Waw

Thank`s for sharing us this words
God bless you

**Try To Reach** · 31-12-2006, 02:32 AM

beautifull poems
you bring

I like 'em all

keep it up

**Meant To be** · 31-12-2006, 08:38 AM

So meaningful one

Thanks sister for sharing it with us

**T.Sultan** · 31-12-2006, 08:08 PM

It's meaningful ... As Enigma said : short yet meaningful ....

Thank you so much for sharing it with us ... Please , keep up the good work.

**Qween** · 05-01-2007, 05:08 PM

tanks every one so much

**J.J** · 05-01-2007, 06:11 PM

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Watching the stars
fade from the sky,
the leaves falling down,
the robin's last cry,
the grass turning brown,
I utter a sigh.
The hardest part
when watching love die,
is whispering softly
the final "goodbye".

************ it's so lovely poem ....
short but it really made me utter a sigh ...
thank you sooooo much for sharing it with us ...

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