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    مميز الصورة الرمزية Na.Na
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    The Tears Are Falling

    hope you like it , It's a poem I got on my e-mail

    The Tears Are Falling



    My heart feels such pain,
    tell me how to stop my tears.
    What can I do to ease the pain?

    Why, has life always been so hard,
    showering me with such heavy burdens?

    The tears keep falling
    as I lay down to sleep.
    My eyes wide open,
    flashes of my past,
    Of things I lost in my life.

    As the tears fall, memories
    floating around in my mind,
    going back in time.
    Remembering all the good times
    When I had it all.

    The tears are falling like a summer rain,
    wishing I could turn back time.
    Never thinking one day, there would
    be no you here beside me.

    With tears falling down my face,
    Knowing there is nothing left
    but my memories of times past,
    When you were there beside me
    Keeping me safe.
    Making all the problems seem small
    As you are standing so tall.

    No tears of sorrow,
    only Love, hope and happiness,
    Never thinking of tomorrow.

    Now as my tears are falling
    there is no one here to wipe them away.
    Just my hands of loneliness
    Praying, what to do.

    I stare at nothing,trying to decide
    where do I go from here,
    Which way do I turn?

    The tears are falling, remembering
    all the things I took for granted,
    now that all is lost and gone.

    As I wipe the tears falling down my face
    I look up to the sky and pray.
    "Please God, help to show me the way.
    Lead me down the right path,
    give me the strength to carry on.
    It's so lonely here by myself
    with so many things to do.
    I need you to give me the faith
    to see me through."

    The tears have stopped falling.
    With God's help I'll figure out
    what I need to do.
    It may not be the best,
    But it's the best that I can do,
    Living my life by myself, without you.

    Ann Taylor

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    thanks Na.Na

    for this sad poem

    i think some parts of the poem have No rythim on it

    and also there is a Mistake maybe not from you but from the post himself ^_^


    wishing I could turn back time.
    Never thinking one day, there would
    be no you here beside me.

    No one

    -if she is writing In Old english Forum it might be right


    all thanks for you sis ..waiting for More

    Your Bro Merlin

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    What an expressive poem it is . Thank you so much . It's a wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading it more than two times... God bless you ...




    Dear Merlin ,

    It's ok to say " there would be no you " I always hear it from natives ... Plus , poets can play with words and grammar .... It's a free writing ...

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    Really it's more than touching poem, plus it's so deep words from truly feelings as I think

    though the rhymes aren't fitted, but still so great


    Thanks Na. Na for the wonderful poem yu shared with us


    I really do like it


    I'm sorry all,


    I had to leave .....


    Uncertain time ,,, MNBA!!!

    :(

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    What an expressive poem it is . Thank you so much . It's a wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading it more than two times... God bless you ...




    Dear Merlin ,

    It's ok to say " there would be no you " I always hear it from natives ... Plus , poets can play with words and grammar .... It's a free writing ...

    i said Before that can be right if the poet is using old english form ..but he didnt cause if he did he will apply it on the rest of the poem.....the problem is that natives Now days are changing grammer rules though they are wrong so when go back to a native linguist he will say Its completely wrong

    anyway .....its a wonderfull poem

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Aseel
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    NaNa

    Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful, emotional poem with us

    WoW

    It's so meaningful

    I really enjoyed reading it so much

    It awakens so many things inside of us



    Best wishes, dear

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية Reena
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    Na.Na

    Thaaaaaaaaaaanx 4 this sad poem

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    انجليزي خبير الصورة الرمزية Wiill Vandom
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    I realy want some one next to me here
    to catch every single tear
    to wave away my fear
    coz I 'm fraid to lose you my dear

    realy wonderful poem

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية f e e l . i t
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    Now as my tears are falling
    there is no one here to wipe them away.
    Just my hands of loneliness
    Praying, what to do.
    i love it . .
    thanx alot ..
    I'm ' just ' Girl

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية enigma
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    Sad yet very expressive

    I felt it deeply

    Thanks for sharing it
    عفوا ......!!

    حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!

    إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!

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    great words

    thanks alot for these lines


    accept my passing

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