Your language is so good
Regarding criticizing your poem, I'm gonna leave it to our brothers Meant to be and Try to Reach
They know alot about writing poems >> They're just experts
They're so talented and for sure they're gonna help you
I'm a big fan of poetry but unfortunately I'm not good at writing poem..
I do write ..and I do have some ..but I don't think it's good
The reason is not that I don't trust in my self ..the problem that "s I don't know the rules, or how to deal with the words and lines ..
another broblem that I don't have alot of vocab. to chose the strongest word and the one that has deeper meaning ..to make my poem send its massege
however that's what I wrote yesterday ..I want you to read and give me your suggestions and advice.. please please critisize my poem and advise me...
when you open your eyes
in the darkness
you know you can find the light
in your kidness
just look deep
dig inside you
believe me you can't keep
your heart behind you...
I'm looking forward to see your comments..and sorry for my poor spelling
Your language is so good
Regarding criticizing your poem, I'm gonna leave it to our brothers Meant to be and Try to Reach
They know alot about writing poems >> They're just experts
They're so talented and for sure they're gonna help you
Thanx sister Aseel for passing by
and thanx for your nice words but realy I need to learn more and the way still too long infront of me to say that my English is good...but realy thanx
I like your perseverance and insistence to master the English language and you really encouraged me to be just like you...... and together we will reach our goal....by the way ... I liked your poetry ....it has very nice meanings......
Well Aseel you put me in trouble , just kidding
Ok sister, I'm so happy to hear that you like poetry either by reading or writing
First, your lines are short, though they have great meanings
But why don't you write more stanzas to make your poem connected to your composed poem
You said in your poem, Dig deep inside you, so I say the same to you
I feel that you can write more than those lines,
whenever you think of writing a poem, think of how you fit the rhyme, it's easy in English
There are no rules to write a poem, as I think we should have called it a free writing, all of us could do that if we just give it a try
,Last but not least
My brother Try To Reach had shared two programs for Nokia mobiles with us in one of his topics, one of them will definitely help you to fit the rhymed words
I checked that topic but the site he uploaded them at, reached the limited time for hosting the file, I will try to upload it to you next time inshallah
I'm sorry all,
I had to leave .....
Uncertain time ,,, MNBA!!!
:(
man you are not that bad at all
keen on my friend
we are reading you
Go ahead we all waiting for more
God bless you
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brother try to reach I'm "A GIRL" why do you all call me man or brother
....
any way Thanx for passing ..
Thanx for help brother meant to be that makes me happy to see more advises
Thanx M.J That's kind of you
:36_4_12:
loooooooooolbrother try to reach I'm "A GIRL" why do you all call me man or brother
any way Thanx for passing ..
I swear to God i haven't noticed that field in your user panel
plz sister forgive me
I didn't meant to
i was in hurry to reply that Quick
your highness
you are more than welcome here
As I promised you sister to share you that program
I hope it helps you
Click Here
I'm sorry all,
I had to leave .....
Uncertain time ,,, MNBA!!!
:(
[QUOTE=Meant To be;269048][FONT="Comic Sans MS"][SIZE="5"][B][COLOR="DarkRed"]As I promised you sister to share you that program
I hope it helps you ]
Thanx again and again brother meant to be
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Wiill Vandom ; 03-04-2007 الساعة 07:20 PM سبب آخر: m
as meant to B said
u'r good but ur lines R too short ..
try to have more lines ..
&
.. it's lovly words
GooD lUcK ^_^
I'm ' just ' Girl
Thanx sister feel it for your advice
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