like a bird….

[Samaya]

Hello everyone
I think this is the first time to write in this club
And I wish this is the beginning

Here I write a special poem
Which is sooo dearest to me
I want to know your opinions
And your feelings towards these words..

Don't worry I can expect your critic


I wish to be like a bird
to fly to distance place
to run away from hurts
where can I enjoy the pleasures of life
no problem
no harm
no pain
no hate
even no tears

As a bird
I can fly till sky
Play and have a fun

As a bird I can sing beautiful songs
No one can stop me

As a bird
No one can say to do and not to do

(with harm tears)
As a bird
No sin
To punish in the last Day

As a bird
No one can count my faults

As a bird
As a bird
As a bird
I can do what I want to do
When I were a bird

I wish to be like a bird….
I wish to be like a bird….

I wish to be like a bird….

[زهرة وفى]

Samia sweety

what a great poem you wrote up there I like so much
it so nice and wonderful

thanks again for the nice poem

keep up the good work

[English Lover]

As a bird
I can fly till sky
Play and have a fun

As a bird I can sing beautiful songs
No one can stop me

very nice


thanx Samaya

[Samaya]

Samia sweety

what a great poem you wrote up there I like so much
it so nice and wonderful

thanks again for the nice poem

keep up the good work

welcome زهرة وفى

Thanx a lot my dear 4 sweet words
the wonderful is your existence here

[Samaya]

very nice


thanx Samaya

Thanx 4 passing


English Lover
You brighten my page

[enigma]

I'm like a bird

I don't know where my home is

...................




Samaya


Aren't you afraid of being shot by hunters








Just kidding


We do feel the same once in a while


Thanks sweetie

[ينقز22]

but pleas be carefull because there are many hunters wating birds

really it is a great one

[Samaya]

I'm like a bird

I don't know where my home is

...................




Samaya


Aren't you afraid of being shot by hunters

it will be my day

Hahaha you make me laugh
( I didn't think about this horrible idea)

enigma
Welcome my dear

[Palestinian Pearl]

My dear sister, Samayah

Let me tell you that

what you wrote was very great indeed

how nice to have such pure mind to write very interesting poem as yours

I really interested reading your poem

and wish if I were a bird without any troubles

sweetie...

I wish you a successful future

may Allah bless you and your efforts

thanks for nice poem

see ya

[Samaya]

but pleas be carefull because there are many hunters wating birds

really it is a great one

Don't worry Iam very smart
No one can catch me, Insh Allah

ينقز22
The great is your appearance

[Samaya]

My dear sister, Samayah

Let me tell you that

what you wrote was very great indeed

how nice to have such pure mind to write very interesting poem as yours

I really interested reading your poem

and wish if I were a bird without any troubles

sweetie...

I wish you a successful future

may Allah bless you and your efforts

thanks for nice poem

see ya

Palestinian Pearl

Thanx a lot for your sweet words

Really can you see what I see by the bird's eyes

You see, how beautiful scene can you enjoy

To tell the truth,
this is the first time to write a compleeeete poem
in English,

Palestinian Pearl
I wish to you what you wish to me

Thanx 4 passing

…

[Wiill Vandom]

nice poem dear sister
Keep it up

[dimon]

Thanks for these nice words that really touches our hearts and souls
i wish you all the best and keep on writing such nice , lovely words that we need

[Aseel]

The moment I read your title , I thought of freedom

lol


It's a nice try, Samaya

Keep going

:)

Best of luck

[Try To Reach]

meaningfully ,, every one wishes so
and me too

thanx sweety Samaya

[Samaya]

Wiill Vandom

I will Insha Allah
Thanx a lot 4 passing by

[Samaya]

Dimon


Really …..
Thanx a lot for sweet words

[Samaya]

Aseel

Really I need the freedom of my soul
But not here……
Please God guid us to the straight path

Thanx my dear
Best regards to u

[Samaya]

Try To Reach

Thanx a lot bro 4 passing by

[tootalshaam]

very nice poem dear sis. just keep on

my regards

[SORA]

I wish to be like a bird

:) I wish to be like abird too

thank you so much

[Miss Innocence]

it's a wonderfull poem

good luck

my dear sister

[أم حمد]

Waaaaaaaaaaaw
How a great feeling
While I was reading u r poem I did feel the sun shining on my face
the moving air indulging me smoothly and gently
And I was light very light in the space laughing and smiling
Darling u have not only shared us the nice words
U made us get to the mood of u r poem and spoiled us like babies
Go on………

[غربة احساس]

it's very nice

Ilike it so much

accept my passing

[Samaya]

very nice poem dear sis. just keep on

my regards

thanx alot for passing by

great regards to u