Missing life

[fona_85]

I missed something in my life
Something makes me fly
Makes me free
Something takes my soul and my sight

I prefer to be a butterfly
Play up and down the tree
How lucky is she
She doesnt lie

Happiness everywhere around me
However how do I like to be
Alive, hide, or die
Who knows what I missed in my life!!



I hope you enjoy it
and
if I have grammar mistakes
It's just a beginning

[Doha ya Doha]

mashallah fona its wonderful
keeeeeeeeeeeeeep going


i'm also a beginner like u


good luck dear...and waiting 4 more

[Aseel]

Masha Allah

Seems that we have new talented people here :)


I have just finished reading a short poem written by Doha


Fona

I would say the same

you have the talent

So keep it up


Waiting for more as Doha said

:)


Best wishes


Aseel

[fona_85]

Thank you Doha & Aseel for passing through my page
I hope you really like it
and I promise you to try and try to do something better

[enigma]

There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me

Thanks for it's beauty dear

Keep it up

[حـلـم انـسـانـه]

We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems

It is very nice poem

Thanks alot

[fona_85]

There's a spiritual light in this post that enlightened me

Thanks for it's beauty dear

Keep it up

Thanx dear for passing
l hope that you really liked it

[fona_85]

We missed in our life Love and Cooperation that make us face problems

It is very nice poem

Thanks alot

Thank you
you are really push me step forward by your comments

[lady maha]

so beautifull
thanks my darlig

[fona_85]

Thanx Lady Maha

you are more welcomed

[naji]

It's realy great

[رساويه]

it is a great poem

keep going

[fona_85]

naji

&

رساوية

Thanx for passing by