the past

[Reckless]

this is a poem about the past , i know every one of us has a past , i wrote it because i felt i need to express something i hope u like it.

The Past

Life is like big tunnel
you go through it so fast
every memory switches like a channel
each one didn't last
i am scared of this dark road
this road road reminds me of the past
every thing I've said or told
a sad play oh! i am one of the cast
a feeling can't be sold
the past is following me so fast
like an old man with a hand so cold
patting on my shoulder as i sat
this memory , this page i can't fold
i wish my past is dead and won't last
killing the happiness in me, as i am getting old

[مــلك الحرف]

Well done Reckless thanks a lot .

[Aseel]

I saw your poem in one of your posts


I liked it so much


It's so expressive and full of pain


It's so sad and just indicates how harsh this life can be



Keep it up, dear

Waiting to read more poems written by you

[Reckless]

Thanks alot that really means a lot to me ,

[Stream]

thankssssss alot

[fona_85]

Reckless
actually it's a wonderful poem
keep it up

[BloumagrieT]

Sometimes we're forced to face that past

specially when it starts haunting us

The pain must be stopped and we're the one who

should do it

Reclkless my brother

A wonderful piece of work we have here

I did enjoy it

Please keep on
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[postgraduate]

Reckless , Well-done!! I really liked it .Thanks for sharing

[rose rani]

beautiful poem well done

[الإسلام تاجي]

.It is wonderful poem

.Thanks a lot

[ريما الحسين]

wow .. !! what amazing poem

I liked it so much

thanks I'm waiting more

[Try To Reach]

so enchanting poem

thanx dear

keep the good work up and up

^_^

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