Last Night

[Instigator]

,Ladies and gentlemen
here I extend the heart
of love with a poet I
.wrote a month ago
Anyway, I would like
.to share it with you
.Enjoy it

Last Night

I stayed up too late last night till dawn
.because I kept waiting my sunshine to phone

"?Once she was home I asked," What is this all about
.When I looked deep within her eyes, I had a doubt

.If you have something to say, just spit it
.If you did something wrong, just admit it

."Listen! I will be so honest and so clear", she said
?I said," I knew it. What happened and what you did

.She said," Look! I feel I am not all yours anymore
".I want to be out of your life and out that door

!"How dare you feeling that and saying "I am not all yours
.If you are not so, my life is definitely going to be in blues

You know what? I need to be with you every where
.because, frankly, you really look after me with care

.I precisely want to share love only with you all the time
.If you do not do me likewise, you indeed like to two-time

,Whenever you want to hurt someone's feelings and flee
.please, just give him his heart back and set it free

,If you keep insisting on making up such unfair mind
.that means you got your life and I lonely got mine

,One last thing I ask, I would like you to dig my own grave
.dress in black and cry over me with a sorrow goodbye wave

,With regards
Instigator

[Mr.X]

I want to be out of your life and out that door

wonderful words..........with deep meaning


Yaaah


......we miss your words bro


Keep on


Mr.X

[مــلك الحرف]

wow

nice words you write it my brother

Thanx Instigator

[Meant To be]

splendid masterpiece, I haven't enjoyed reading it though

I will be back with a suitable comment

Till then, have a pleasant day

Peace

[غرور أنثى]

I really enjoyed reading ur topic
it's wonderful...so keep it up

With all my best

[Aseel]

One last thing I ask, I would like you to dig my own grave
.dress in black and cry over me with a sorrow goodbye wave

I really don't find the words that would describe how marvellous


your poem is



It's one of the most touching, amazing poems I've ever read



It's covered with sorrow and pain


It's so sad and painful to find out that those who meant so much to you,

you meant actually nothing to them


:(


Waiting to read more poems written by you


Actually, our two poets, Meant to be and Try to Reach, have deprived us from their poems


It has been a long time since their last poems :(

[الولائي]

:36_4_12:I am realy intersted in poems although sometimes I don't understand it

Thanks very much

I wish to you the success

[library2]

I liked this poem because it's full of meaning and emotions
also, you have a good choice of phrases and words
you're talented
but does this poem speak about a real situation? if it does.. how could you make your life dependant on someone's feeling? I'm sure your life is more significant that to be bounded with someon's emotions
tha's my opinion..
good luck and keep on the good work

[basma2007]

:36_4_12:thanks for eny think :36_16_16:

[Try To Reach]

Instigator

I never enjoyed the pain but i follow your red words

astonished

each time i stopped by one of them

Good sense of writing no doubt

thanx for giving me the right to come here and see your creative writing

go ahead dear




bs : Aseel go away

[CHARLES DICKENS]

Whenever you want to hurt someone's feelings and flee
.please, just give him his heart back and set it free

Stating such a hard order , Suggestion if I might say , in a situation full of passions is really brave
!!

Instigator.....Long time no see ...you've been really missed in the club
keep your poetic butterflies hovering around mate..Would you
?

Yours
Mona Dickens

[enigma]

Instigator

Man

We haven't read from you in ages

Really glad that you came back and chose these beautiful lines to share with us

[Instigator]

wonderful words..........with deep meaning


Yaaah


......we miss your words bro


Keep on


Mr.X

.Your words mean a lot to me
.I miss you all, too
.Thanks a lot bro

[Instigator]

wow

nice words you write it my brother

Thanx Instigator

,Dear bro
.your reply is nicer. Thanks

[Instigator]

splendid masterpiece, I haven't enjoyed reading it though

I will be back with a suitable comment

.Don't keep me waiting,please

Till then, have a pleasant day

Peace

.Same to you, dear
Peace

[Instigator]

I really enjoyed reading ur topic
it's wonderful...so keep it up

With all my best

.I am glad you liked it
Best regards

[Instigator]

I really don't find the words that would describe how marvellous


your poem is



It's one of the most touching, amazing poems I've ever read



It's covered with sorrow and pain

.I don't know what to say
I am speechless and running out of
the best and beautiful words to say
.thanks a lot, dear sister

It's so sad and painful to find out that those who meant so much to you,

you meant actually nothing to them


:(

That's really right because I have
.tried them and their reactions
,The moment I remember them
what they did to me twists my heart
!to cry. So, I ask WHY

Waiting to read more poems written by you

Please, don't be so because I
rarely write poems unless you
.have time to wait more

Actually, our two poets, Meant to be and Try to Reach, have deprived us from their poems


It has been a long time since their last poems :(

May Allah help them to be around
.with us to keep writing up

[Instigator]

:36_4_12:I am realy intersted in poems although sometimes I don't understand it

Thanks very much

I wish to you the success

.I am happy you are intersted in poem
You will understand it if you read
.it with imagining and living the situation
.Try to read with passion
.That's my point of view
.Take it or leave it
Thanks

[Instigator]

I liked this poem because it's full of meaning and emotions
also, you have a good choice of phrases and words
you're talented
but does this poem speak about a real situation? if it does.. how could you make your life dependant on someone's feeling? I'm sure your life is more significant that to be bounded with someon's emotions
tha's my opinion..
good luck and keep on the good work

.I am happy you like my words
.No, I am not that talented
.Don't exaggerate, please

No way and thank Allah this poem
.doesn't speak of a real living situation
I respect and adore people's opinion
.and I take yours
Thanks

[Instigator]

:36_4_12:thanks for eny think :36_16_16:

.I am happy you like it
THANKS

[Instigator]

Instigator

I never enjoyed the pain but i follow your red words

astonished

each time i stopped by one of them

Good sense of writing no doubt

thanx for giving me the right to come here and see your creative writing

go ahead dear




bs : Aseel go away

I am really happy you enjoyed
.and liked my words, dear

.bs: help me to kick Aseel away
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BAD BOY, hah

[Instigator]

Stating such a hard order , Suggestion if I might say , in a situation full of passions is really brave
!!

.Yeah, I have nothing to lose
.Truth hurts

Instigator.....Long time no see ...you've been really missed in the club
keep your poetic butterflies hovering around mate..Would you
?

Yours
Mona Dickens

.I know that but I missed you, too
.I would do so if I could
.Thanks a lot for encouraging me
.Keep it up
Yours
Yasser

[Instigator]

Instigator

Man

.Yup, Enigma

We haven't read from you in ages

.You make me feel older with white hair
.Come on!!!! I am still young

Really glad that you came back and chose these beautiful lines to share with us

I am happy to be in my second
.home sharing my words with you, too

[NIGHT.BARONESS]

thanks sister
soo greaet word

go on

[Aseel]

bs : Aseel go away

bs: help me to kick Aseel away

out, both of you