my friend

[NIGHT.BARONESS]

oh my friend,
I can't beleive that you'll leave me..
I'll be lone without you
I can't imagine my life without you
coz you've changed my life to the best
coz I feel happy with you
I forget my sadness when I be with you
really
I love you
and I can say:
what I need you
if you leave
maybe it's the end of me
I'll be body without soul
I'll never forget those great days with you
you are all thing in my life
if you leave, I'll lose my life


in the end
just I wanna to say some things....

I love you
I give you my soul
it's gift for you allthough I'm sure
it's not enough for you
and I'll never ever forget you


and remember dear

you'll still in my heart
your sound will be always in my ears
your face..your smile in my memory
and your name in my mind

really
I'll never forget you






if there is wrong tell me
ok ??

[مــلك الحرف]

NIGHT.BARONESS

thanks for it and i will be waiting for more

[Instigator]

.Spectacular piece of writing, Baroness
You really have a tender loving heart
.because these words reflect your personality

.Keep it up

[Try To Reach]

actually i wanna say sth but plz never take it personaly

i wanna say that your writing was just beautiful

but the problem lie in the repetitions in words like

without you

you may say other expressions instead

be creative sis

and go for it

bring strange words that carried different meanings

all the best

sister

[Aseel]

Nice words


lucky are your friends for having you :)


I feel that you have the talent


you just need to work on it


:)


All the best

[English Lover]

NIGHT.BARONESS

I guess it's OK


Why didn't you get in SHA3Er ALMALEOM?


You may be famous

[enigma]

Nice words

Thanks dear

[البـارع]

if some people still in our hearts, its grievous to be far away, otherwise will be lucky to keep in touch with our beloveds
.
.
NIGHT.BARONESS

good work, keep up
regards

[NIGHT.BARONESS]

all of u
thanks for your opinions

you've supported me


you 'll see my new topics (in sha allah(

[E.T.Reem]

Thanks alot
for this great
topic

accept my passing

[mother of 4girl]

How greateful are you friends
you are a thankful friend
I like your topic
accept my regards

[NIGHT.BARONESS]

thaanks all of you
for your opinions