you have repeated the word pain many times in your poem as a signal of your deep feeling of pain and sorrow
the reader will figure out that yuor deep pain is preventing you or works as an obstacle to elaborate and write more rhe readeras finishing the poem will just feel that your eyes are full of tears and your voice doesn`t help you to talk more and you just have nod your head after uttering the last words in a very sad voice the poem is short but it has many things to convey
thanke for sharing us your writings
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