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    Thumbs up I was her everything


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    A Heart Touching Poem

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    I was a just-born and she was Twenty-Five,
    Though we were we, we were one.
    I would cry out in Latin and she would respond in Greek,
    I would learn nothing but she never got tired to teach.

    I was surrounded by monsters eager to pull my cheek,
    but they would vanish the moment I was wet and weep.
    She would come running and hold me in her arms,
    as if I had won the contest of the charms.

    Now I was able to walk and chew,
    and hey, I was two.
    I and she could now understand each other,
    I was her everything and she needed no other.

    I would try to walk and fall down,
    But knowing she was with me,
    the fear of getting hurt was now gone.
    We still could not converse that effectively,
    But she would understand my needs so easily.

    I could now roam about free,
    because now I have turned three.
    I was ready to join a new world,
    my academic life was now gonna mould.

    She would dress me as best as a prince,
    but when I would come back,
    she would need at least an hour to rinse.
    I was now able to talk,
    I was a ferry and she was my dock.

    I still remember the child, whose shirt I had tore,
    Hey buddy, I have turned four.
    I now came home a little late,
    Nevertheless finding her waiting at the gate.
    She would hug me and carry me in her arms,
    it felt like flying through the farms.
    We now did the homework together,
    I would spoil the home and she used to work.

    Years passed and now I was fifteen,
    and with each year I would forget to lean.
    I wouldn't care for what she said,
    because now I had become mean.
    She would ask me to study for a good future,
    but I was busy in a different culture.
    Now I had many shes in my life,
    I dreamed of having one of them as my wife.

    I changed a lot which she did not teach,
    She would try to hug me but I was out of reach.
    She still waited for me at the gate,
    but I would look at her with utmost hate.
    She would be awake till late in the night,
    because I wasn't home, I was in a fight.
    She had so much to scold, but she never did say,
    hoping to find me better the next day.
    Time went on and now I am grown,
    lost in the world of my own.

    I and she, between us have a river,
    I have left her for my career.
    When I was young, for me, she sacrificed her ambitions,
    but I don't care, I now have my own mission.
    I am not with her now, I am in a different city,
    she is so old now but I don't even pity.

    She needs me now but I am nowhere to find,
    in the race for appraisal, I have become blind.
    In a few years from now, I will be two,
    there will be in my life someone new.
    Then I'll forget even to bother,
    I am her son and she is my Mother.


    I hope you like it as I did .When I read it first
    I could not hold my inner tears or hide them


    *******************************
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    wow they are wonderful
    lines inwhich they describe
    the reality of our life

    you are such a great writer sir

    thank you so much for sharing us

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    May Allah keep our beloved mothers happy and in a good health.

    Touching poem wallah .

    Thank you brother.

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rose rani مشاهدة المشاركة
    wow they are wonderful
    lines inwhich they describe
    the reality of our life

    you are such a great writer sir

    thank you so much for sharing us

    Thanks so much .These lines are of what I read
    They are not mine .Happy to see you here
    God bless you
    .

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة M.o_o.N مشاهدة المشاركة
    May Allah keep our beloved mothers happy and in a good health.

    Touching poem wallah .

    Thank you brother.
    Thanks a lot

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    رد: I was her everything

    I like it so much.
    I think that I should give some poems to my students the next year.
    Because they almost have a moral lesson.

    Thanx bro for your gr8 choice.


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    Thanks alot sir 4 this great peom


    I enjoyed it

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sirhasan مشاهدة المشاركة

    Thanks so much .These lines are of what I read
    They are not mine .Happy to see you here
    God bless you
    .





    I am so sorry I thought it is you

    but any way

    thank you for sharing

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    often we don't feel the value of people whom we love but

    after loosing them we

    realize how much mean we were


    or understand our fault after too late


    thank you sir


    i liked it too
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    .


    Here and there


    .


    .

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    I was a just-born and she was Twenty-Five,
    Though we were we, we were one.
    I would cry out in Latin and she would respond in Greek,
    I would learn nothing but she never got tired to teach.
    so amazing...it touch you here <3
    true feelings ,,that what make wonderful poems reach a high level of Appreciation
    ....
    love the whole poem but the above lines ...show how their relationship go beyond the language. the contact by their emotions ..highly level of love..

    thank u for sharing with us these inspiring lines...

    ur topics r always Appreciated by all of us...

    Pause = IF You Must
    But Don't STOP ..




    i'll be back someday <3

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Lancaster مشاهدة المشاركة
    I like it so much.
    I think that I should give some poems to my students the next year.
    Because they almost have a moral lesson.

    Thanx bro for your gr8 choice.

    Welcome again . Many thanks for you
    I am happy you liked it
    God bless you

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة JoRy PriNcEsS مشاهدة المشاركة
    Thanks alot sir 4 this great peom


    I enjoyed it
    Happy to read that . Thanks for being here

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    I recite it by my heart before my eyes
    My Tears can,t ignore its beauty

    thank
    my Sir
    for giving me this chance
    to dive with this great meaning



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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة pink-pen مشاهدة المشاركة
    often we don't feel the value of people whom we love but

    after loosing them we

    realize how much mean we were


    or understand our fault after too late


    thank you sir


    i liked it too

    Many thanks for your post . It's always appreciated

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    so amazing...it touch you here <3
    true feelings ,,that what make wonderful poems reach a high level of Appreciation
    ....
    love the whole poem but the above lines ...show how their relationship go beyond the language. the contact by their emotions ..highly level of love..

    thank u for sharing with us these inspiring lines...

    ur topics r always Appreciated by all of us...

    What you wrote about the poem's analysis is of great importance . Yes , it is a high
    level of love , a pure one , a true unconditional love . The mother's emotions are
    the fuel that keeps that love going . She gives and waits for no reward for that

    Thanks so much for your post . Always appreciated
    .

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ثرى المدينه مشاهدة المشاركة
    I recite it by my heart before my eyes
    My Tears can,t ignore its beauty

    thank
    my Sir
    for giving me this chance
    to dive with this great meaning


    Gos bless your pure heart . Stop your tears
    wipe them out and smile but keep the lesson
    in mind . How mothers suffer and how their
    children become more and more
    indifferent . Many thanks dear


    .

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rose rani مشاهدة المشاركة


    I am so sorry I thought it is you

    but any way

    thank you for sharing
    you are always welcome . It's all right

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    Touching indeed

    May Allah bestow health and long life to our mothers

    Thank you sir


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    وللمسلمين والمسلمات و المؤمنين والمؤمنات
    الأحياء منهم والأموات إلى يوم الدين



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    Touching indeed

    May Allah bestow health and long life to our mothers

    Thank you sir


    You are most welcome . Appreciated

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    What a lucky mother she is

    to have a son like you

    May Allah bless you


    Nice poam really


    ^_^

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    What a lucky mother she is

    to have a son like you

    May Allah bless you


    Nice poam really


    ^_^

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    Sense

    Thanks a lot for your sweet words . They are highly appreciated

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    رد: I was her everything

    thanks alot

    i always believe that words never help to express sometime

    thanks alot any way
    good choice

    استغفر الله العظيم الذي لا إله إلا هو الحي القيوم وأتوب إليه

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    yes,
    the mother the person who gives without waiting for any rewards
    Thanks alot Our Great Teacher
    In Life ........... Every thing is POSSiBLE ..........Justif we have the WILL
    the AMBITION
    and..............
    the ENTHUSIASM

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    thanks alot

    i always believe that words never help to express sometime

    thanks alot any way
    good choice
    Thanks for being here

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