thanx dear
we enjoy it
Under that tree he was setting watching the waves
He looks very old, sad, and lonely
Life did not treat him gently, I can see that
To him I was going with nothing but my love
Are you lost my dear? That what he said when I reached him
No, no
So what brought you here?
You
Me
Yes
Why
To take your hand
To where
To the sea don’t you want to go there
Yes, how did you know
Your eyes, they were following the tide
Do not you want to go
Rising his head so slowly, I can see his smile now
Yes, but my legs are so week
Don’t worry, I said. I will catch you if you fall
Tears running down proudly, yes, yes you will catch me
I hope you will like it
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆ ; 05-07-2010 الساعة 11:58 PM
اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح
thanx dear
we enjoy it
Thanks so much .It's very touching
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
very nice my dear sister , simple and easy. I liked it . Keep writing and do your best I am sure that will improve your writings Insha Allah.
I have to tell you one point , be careful while writing. You'v miss spelled some words and that changed the meaning. Like "see" you surely meant "sea" . Also "know" you meant "now" . Tiny mistakes but to be a great writer you should avoid such mistakes.
Again, thank you huny for sharing with us
Happy to be here :D
thanks my dear
i wish u the best of luck
المحبة في الله نعمة من الله ..
فقد الأحبة في الله غربة ..
والتواصل معهم أنس ومسرة ..
هم للعين قرة ..
فسلام على من دام في القلب ذكراهم ..
وإن غابوا عن العين قلنا يا رب احفظهم وارعاهم ..
سبحان الله والحمدلله ولا اله الا الله
lovely lines
thanks for sharing
Perfect and influent. Thanks a lot my sister and I hope from you more.
think you sweetie
you have a talent sure but you need to improve it by reading
and keep it up
Sun Light
Great image .Thanks alot
i love it
simple and so touching
thanks alot
^^
استغفر الله العظيم الذي لا إله إلا هو الحي القيوم وأتوب إليه
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