Topic, narrowing, topic sentence, and supporting details

**smack** · 21-07-2010, 10:03 PM

Hi everybody I want to submit some topic, narrowing, topic sentence, and supporting details. And I want from you if anyone notice any mistake plz correct to me, because I want to know my error and thanks.

First I want to give you example:
Topic: Driving
Narrowing the topic: Driving on freeways
Topic sentence: Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness.

Know my solved.

Topic: Food
Narrowing the topic: Healthy food
Topic sentence: Healthy food essential for body growth.

Topic: Teaching
Narrowing the topic: Teaching in university
Topic sentence: Teaching in university requires more intensive efforts.

Topic: Studying abroad
Narrowing the topic: English studying
Topic sentence: Studying abroad is not easy as you expect.

Right know I will write supporting details:
Collage students have a stressful life.
Supporting details 1: First reasons: Some students are working and learning in the same time.
Supporting details 2: Second reasons: Some students have problems in financial situation.

Learning English requires a lot of time and effort.
Supporting details 1: First reasons: to make language better.
Supporting details 2: Second reasons: Help you to studying the materials that required a good language.