I was disappeared

[prettyالسبهه]

I was sitting on my old yellow sofa
When my mother passed beside me
And said her kind routine phrase
Sleep early your face became pale" "
I looked around , there was no change.
Today like yesterday. Oh, I am boring
I wanted an adventure take me to learn something
But how? I was screaming inside
How
Suddenly I couldn't see myself
But I can breathing ,moving and talking
I stood front of mirror
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I disappeared
But wait that what I need to go anywhere
I rushed to the street it was quilt , dark and empty
I was scare it was a first time walking alone in a midnight
Lonely without Abayah
I saw our neighbor's door open
I went inside passing by
The back yard and I stooped in the salon
What I am going to do ?? I have to go back
Ooooh this house is empty where are they?
May something happened to them or may I am just Curious
I looked for them
I found their mother Om faisal but what is wrong
With her, she looked tired , sad , lonely
And she was talking to herself "I have to call them , they should live with me
No ,I have to live with my sister ,oh no she have her husband
Oh yah I found it my daughter she must to leave her job but she needs to work
what can I do the loneliness kill me " then I could see her tears
I thought she was happy . I went to my home
And when I was running to my bed from the bad thoughts inside me
I crashed my mother . she smiled to me
Why you did not sleep right now??
Cause I am happy to be together
But wait I was back to my normality
I wrote it and I wait your comments

[ACME]

You have a vivid imagination . The setting and the way the story develops is amazing
You ended the story in a wonderful moral lesson . I enjoyed reading it .Keep on writing .

This sentence needs to be corrected

But I can breathing ,moving and talking
I stood front of mirror

To this
But I can breathe ,move and talk
I stood in front of the mirror

[((بنت المدينه))]

Realy It's a good story
I like it

Thanx alot

[prettyالسبهه]

You have a vivid imagination . The setting and the way the story develops is amazing
You ended the story in a wonderful moral lesson . I enjoyed reading it .Keep on writing .

sirhasan your comments bush me to go on
thanks for truth words
oh yah
I am lucky my mistakes became less than before

[prettyالسبهه]

You have a vivid imagination . The setting and the way the story develops is amazing
You ended the story in a wonderful moral lesson . I enjoyed reading it .Keep on writing .

sirhasan your comments bush me to go on
thanks for truth words
oh yah
I am lucky my mistakes became less than before

[prettyالسبهه]

Realy It's a good story
I like it

Thanx alot

بنت المدينة
thanks for nice and lovely comments

[prettyالسبهه]

Realy It's a good story
I like it

Thanx alot

بنت المدينة
thanks for nice and lovely comments

[Mr.Salem]

It’s absolutely obvious that you have put so much effort in writing such an awesome story. Starting with the very organized content, marked with so beautiful colors except for the yellow … 
I have one thing left to say … go Pretty Alsabha go ….

[prettyالسبهه]

It’s absolutely obvious that you have put so much effort in writing such an awesome story. Starting with the very organized content, marked with so beautiful colors except for the yellow … 
I have one thing left to say … go Pretty Alsabha go ….

Alanaze
are you happy now? hahaha
thanks allot for ur nice comment
really your words lead me to proud of myself<<<ego
and thanks for passing by

[Mr.Salem]

OK As soon as I get to be a supervisor in this clup. I will take of the yellow color of the list Prety Alsabha

Thanks for the nice response

[DIMPLES]

very nice story

thanx for sharing it with us

[prettyالسبهه]

very nice story

thanx for sharing it with us

DIMPLES
thanks for nice comments and thanks for passing by

[abu ghararah]

Creative writers are always greater than the causes that they represent
so
thanks tooo mutch

[@ صعب المنال @]

amazing

thanks so much

[:lost lady:]

What an imaginative writer,, Mash' Allah
I like your choice of words and how did you represent and end the story.
A great job dear sis
keep it up,,,waiting for more of your creativity

[prettyالسبهه]

Creative writers are always greater than the causes that they represent

abugrarah
I missed ur comments
you gave me more confidence
thanks for commend me+
really I am happy to passing by
thanks allot

[prettyالسبهه]

amazing

صعب المنال
welcome in our club
and thanks for passing by

[prettyالسبهه]

What an imaginative writer,, Mash' Allah
I like your choice of words and how did you represent and end the story.
A great job dear sis
keep it up,,,waiting for more of your creativity

lost lady
your words are honer to me
thanks for lovely comment and for passing by

[prettyالسبهه]

What an imaginative writer,, Mash' Allah
I like your choice of words and how did you represent and end the story.
A great job dear sis
keep it up,,,waiting for more of your creativity

lost lady
your words are honer to me
thanks for lovely comment and for passing by

[member]

Wow u are writer

[قلم الرصاص]

Really I enjoyed reading it

ماشاء الله good writing

I wish you more creativity

Thank you so much

[prettyالسبهه]

Wow u are writer

member
thanks so much for passing by
and nice comment

[prettyالسبهه]

Really I enjoyed reading it

ماشاء الله good writing

I wish you more creativity

Thank you so much

قلم رصاص
I missed you
really I am grateful for passing by+