Out inThe Dark P 1

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Out in the dark

Sitting in their broken car .trying to find out their way in this dark isolated place, Jack and Adam were very tired of their long ride

"What can we do now jack? Is this your special place you keep telling me about?" Adam said in an angry tone
"Adam why are you so angry I will find out the problem and I will fix it. And no, this is not the place that we are going to". Jack left the car to check out the problem
Oh what is this?" Jack shouted"
What?" Adam asked"
"I can't believe this?"Jack shouted .the car's engine is broken
"You must be joking, how can this happen." Adam said
What can we do now?" Adam asked"
"Don’t worry, I will call for help." Jack went to the car to look for his cell phone but he could not find it
This is weird," jack shouted"
What?" Adam asked"
"I can't find my cell phone, did you see it" .jack asked
No, I didn’t." Adam answered"
"Take my phone you will find it in my jacket." Adam said
I can't find it, either." Jack shouted"
"You must be kidding me" .Adam can't believe what he heard
It is all your fault?" Adam screamed"
"My fault, why? Because I want to spend my holiday with you, you my only brother. "Jack shouted
Their loud voices broke the silence of the night, and without noticing what is happing around them, and what is watching them under this darkness the two brothers start fighting.
The golden eyes with their hungry souls started to gathered around them now, and the brothers were still fighting.

"I will go home; I am not going to spend the night here in this isolated place." Adam said
"You must be crazy; the last village we saw was about 20 miles ago." Jack protested
Don’t look at me like this, jack?" Adam shouted"
Like what?" Jack said"
"Oh, don’t, don’t play the big brothers game now." Adam said
"What game you are talking about?" Jack looked very surprised of his brother words
"Oh .jack, you are our parent's favorite child, you are number one and I am nothing compared to you," Adam cried
Adam stop. Did you hear that?""
"What now? Don’t tell me you are scared?" Adam said
"No, seriously, Adam stop, I have heard something." Jack started to look around.
"Oh. Dear. Adam lets go to the car." Jack whispered
Why? What is wrong?" Adam asked"
"Why do you keep asking me, why, for god sake? Just go. Now", Jack ordered him
Very slowly," jack added"
But the wolves did not wait; they ran toward them
Run Adam, the wolves behind us." Jack shouted"
Wolves! oh god, oh god ". Adam ran very fast"
They reached the car and closed the door just before the wolves jumped on the car.
"Check all the back windows, Adam, and be sure they are all closed ." jack shouted
"It is too late they are already here!", Adam whispered
Death is looking at them now with his shining eyes.
What is going to happen?

To be continued

by :sun light

[:lost lady:]

oh,,what will happen to them ??? O_o
It was really interesting to read. The format of your writing was what kept me most interested.
The description you put into the story was spectacular.You were showing us more than telling which makes your story really shine
The story is absolutely AWESOME and well written
You did a great job. I am looking forward to reading more and more of your stories
Keep it up Sis

please accept my passing

[prettyالسبهه]

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
what is will happen to them
its so frightening
complete it PLZ+

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

oh,,what will happen to them ??? O_o
It was really interesting to read. The format of your writing was what kept me most interested.
The description you put into the story was spectacular.You were showing us more than telling which makes your story really shine
The story is absolutely AWESOME and well written
You did a great job. I am looking forward to reading more and more of your stories
Keep it up Sis

please accept my passing

lost lady
thank you my dear sis for your lovely words and for your support
it means alot to me

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
what is will happen to them
its so frightening
complete it PLZ+

prettyالسبهه

thank you pretty for your support

i will try to complete it if you all like it

[آنسهOoفكره]

well done,,
dear sun light..i really liked the story..

cant wait for the rest ..
hurry up please..=)

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

well done,,
dear sun light..i really liked the story..

cant wait for the rest ..
hurry up please..=)

انسهOoفكره

thank you dear sis for every word you wrote
here .your support means alot to me

[MisS shy]

what's going to happen,then? ....it's really intresting story .. would you please sister continue?we're all waiting for the rest..may Allah protect you sis ^^..take care

[muhamedr]

keep it on
it's great thank you

[الليل الشجن]

wooooooow idon't like horrer stories but ilike the way you write

[ACME]

I liked this horror story and anticipate the second part to reveal
the fate of the two brothers . I hope things may turn on well for them
Thanks for this topic . Keep on writing

[Eyes of maam]

thanxxx my brother for ur story which i like 2 much we already wanaa to know what happened to them keep on my dear

[Miss-Thought]

thanks a million

I enjoyed reading it

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

I liked this horror story and anticipate the second part to reveal
the fate of the two brothers . I hope things may turn on well for them
Thanks for this topic . Keep on writing

You are most welcome
Sir .I wish I can complete it these days I cAn not write anything

[rose rani]

interesting story
I like it

we are waiting dear

[hot-meme=girl]

WoOoOoOoW

really it's intresting honey SunLight
What will happen plz I can't wait
truely i liked it SoOoOo much

I think the wolves gona eat them
hahahahahahah>>>>> evil laugh

Thanx So much dear 4 ur interisting story an' we're waiting the end
May God bless u honey

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanxxx my brother for ur story which i like 2 much we already wanaa to know what happened to them keep on my dear

Eyes of maam

you are most welcome and thank you for your lovely comments

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks a million

I enjoyed reading it

Miss-Thought

you are most welcome
I miss you honey