A new Day Has Come

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks......................

شوق الجوف

you are welcome

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees



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Great Feelings


What an amazing picture you draw, as if you have an artist brush and you do a paint in front of us

You have a wide immagination TABAK ALLAH

I said that before you are a POET


KEEP ON SISTER


Thank you for sharing us this

DR AHLAIN

I dont know what to say coz every word you wrote here was like a big prize for me
thank you for being here and for your support

[Mr.Salem]

Sunlight ....
I have an idea. These words need to be recorded in a CD and given to a coffee shop to be played in the morning, Because I felt while reading these words that I was sitting in a very nice coffee shop " Dounken Donates" drinking my black cofee " low sugar ,, reading the news paper and It's raining out side" hhhhhhhh


Thanks a lot , please share with us whatever you write ,, you are my favorate aouther.

[:lost lady:]

what a lovely poem indeed
full of hope and optimism
strong images and strong language
Mash' Allah a fertile imagination and your descriptions bring the reader into the moment,.
You did something truly remarkable
These particular lines grabbed my attention

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees
Children's laughter is bringing life
again to the abandoned streets

Rated with 1000,000 STARS
I'm looking forward to reading more and more sweetie

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

thanks I really miss sweet words
Thanks again

سونة30;1206194

you are most welcome dear

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~~thank you

Miss koka

you are most welcome

[motyri]

as allways sunlight steels the lights of all of us and rocking this site up side down

i enjoy your threads

so keep it coming my supervisor

[ACME]

The images and choice of words are wonderful
Full of optimism and high spirits
Keep it up . I liked it


I have one small comment about the struture
of the first sentence . There is no need for the
verb to be ( is ) because it is in the active form

The darkness of the night is
retreated in silence

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
thank you

banani

you are welcome dear

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Thanx so much sweety

ur poem gives a hope of a new brightful day

i liked it so much coz it made me fly with the natural images

meme=girl

I am so glad that my poem was able to give you this kind of feeling
thank you dear for being here

[سعودي 03]

ThanK ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

Sunlight ....
I have an idea. These words need to be recorded in a CD and given to a coffee shop to be played in the morning, Because I felt while reading these words that I was sitting in a very nice coffee shop " Dounken Donates" drinking my black cofee " low sugar ,, reading the news paper and It's raining out side" hhhhhhhh


Thanks a lot , please share with us whatever you write ,, you are my favorate aouther.

alanazi

you are welcome bro and thank you for your lovely comments
May Allah bless you

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

what a lovely poem indeed

full of hope and optimism
strong images and strong language
Mash' Allah a fertile imagination and your descriptions bring the reader into the moment,.
You did something truly remarkable
These particular lines grabbed my attention

Winds are breathing so gently
I can hear their soft whispers
waking up the old trees
Children's laughter is bringing life
again to the abandoned streets

Rated with 1000,000 STARS
I'm looking forward to reading more and more sweetie

lost lady

I miss you sooo much
thank you for being here dear

[smack]

Amazing
Thanks