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    correct me please

    The author begins with an attractive sentences in order to keep the reader reading hers . She motivates people to give a hand and help one onthers even though they do not know each other. She turns attention the readers to other who are suffering from poverty and illness by asking people to take a look at themselves. For example, how they eat more than they need without concerning there are who is can not find thing in his/ her home to eat. She comes up with names of organizations that need what you can do for them. Furthermore, she mentions for each organization its number phone. However, they do look after single parent family and elderly people. Basically, she illustrate the idea that stand behind the children organization and how they do take care on they by provide them with their needs like, achieve their dream.

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    انجليزي خبير الصورة الرمزية motyri
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    For example, how they eat more than they need without concerning . there are who is can not find thing in his/ her home to eat.

    there is who cant fint any food



    she illustrate the idea that stand behind the children organization and how they do take care on they by provide


    stands
    organizations
    how do they take care of them by providing



    قود لك

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    thank u :)

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    انجليزي خبير الصورة الرمزية motyri
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    سزري غلطت بكلمة فايند

    ولا شكر ع واجب

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    thank you brother almotyri

    may Allah reward you




    sister check mine also^^



    you must mention her book or article because you say it for the first time so it will be like this


    her book,,or her article...etc



    The author begins with an attractive sentences in order to keep the reader reading her (book, article) . She motivates people to give a hand and help one another even though they do not know each other. She turns the readers' attention to other who are suffering from poverty and illness by asking people to take a look at themselves. For example, how do they eat more than they need without concerning there are who cannot find anything at his/ her home to eat. She comes up with names of organizations that need what you can do for them. Furthermore, she mentions for each organization its number phone. However, they do look after single parent family and elderly people. Basically, she illustrates the idea that stands behind the children's organization and how they do take care on them by providing them with their needs like, achieving their dream

    wish you the best
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    Here and there


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