وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته..
حياك أختي الغالية عبق الزهوور
تعبيرك جيد ولم ينقصة سوى أخطاء إملائية بسيطة..
عدلت لك الموضوع ..وإذا كان هنالك أخطاء أخرى ..فأعذريني لأني لم ألاحظها..
My Small World
Everyone has a favorite place . I love spending a lot of time in it because it makes me feel comfortable . .First of all , I have a small bed , but it is comfortable . Next to my bed , there is a closet . Where I store my pants, shirts, coats and much more. There is also a box that has trash bags, hangers and a few other thing. On the walls, there are framed pictures hanged and big mirror . A very important thing in my room is my studying desk Under that , there is a shelf where I keep my private library . My library consist of different kind of magazines , photo albums , dictionaries and a few stories. Also , I have an alarm clock on the disk . I consider the alarm clock as an important thing because it wakes me up in the morning . Finally , I love my room , and it is my favorites place where I feel free
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