i wanna feel ur love
i wanna steal ur laugh
i wanna be ur
really beautiful poem
carry on
Hi guys...
Today i was sooo bored, because i had been waiting for my next lecture
at the university for almost 3 hours befor i got to class
so, i tried to write my first simple and humble poem
lol
To U baby
i gotta take u away away
cuz i wanna make u free
,,,,, ,,,,, ,,,,,
look at my broken heart
don't tell me u cannot see
i wanna feel ur love
i wanna steal ur laugh
i wanna be ur half
i wanna make it (we
(i hope u like it (we
WE...baby
(YOU, love and (me
To You baby
Note: I wanna ake it "we"
means..I want to make the "I" becomes "WE"
like: We wanna feel our love...(we instead of I) on the other hand..to be lovers
your opinion pleas
I hope u liked it
...MUStafa
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة morris ; 24-11-2011 الساعة 02:12 PM سبب آخر: using Arabic is not allowed here.
i wanna feel ur love
i wanna steal ur laugh
i wanna be ur
really beautiful poem
carry on
you can only go as far as you puch
Thank YOU Jawhar
My pleasure
very nice and lovely full of passion poem
go a head brother
I loved the poem
Thank you for sharing it with us
welcome to our EC
It is a lovely poem,bro
well done
اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح
moon, just me
thaaaaaaaaaaanx so much
that's my pleasure
now I'm really keen to keep up
thank YOU again
you've written this by yourself ! nice :)
thank for sharing us , i love it
المجتمعات بأفرادها تتحكم بها التصورات والقيم والإهتمامات التي تشربتها وتبرمجت بها تلقائيا لكن السياسة هي التي تتحكم بالثقافة اتجاها ومحتوى
thaaaaaanx Reeeeema
i loved ur comment
luv it
keep it up
<3
want to go back to the time
When drinking meant chocolate milk
When dad was the only hero
When love was mom's hug
When dad's shoulder was the highest place on the earth
When goodbyes only meant till tomorrow
And when apple and blackberry were just fruits
<3اللهم اشرح لي صدري وسهل علي جُلًّ امري
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Sweet words bro & sweet luv ^____^
Keep on an' always share us ur poem
May God Bless U
merci meme-girl
my pleasure
:)
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