تكملة القصة في work book

[naaada]

A man told him that he has a gift from his father who did from five years . He said : I think that he is mad and i end the call. went to have a shawer . while Iwas having shawer ,i smell a fire . that was my dinner i forgat to turn off the coocker . when i was trying to call a resturant for a delivary , i found the man on the line calling for another time He wants me to come to him . Itold him i will do because i wants him go away from me . At that night and while i was eating dinner , T heard the rang > I opened the door i found a gift . It was a gift from my father . He was gave it to me befor he died . then i gave it to my frien befor three months and he want to gave it me back as if it a new gift from my father> So, I spent the night reading the book. .

[Marshmallows]

سلمت الايادي وجزيت خيرا
دمت للمنتدى لاعدمناك

[naaada]

من جد إذا فية أي تعليق لاتبخلون علي فية أنا أول سنة لي بس نفسي أشارك معاكم ولو بشئ بسيط إنشاء الله إستفدتو منة لاتحطموني؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

[ابو دانا]

اولا ممكن ردي يكون متأخر شوي لكن اعتقد اني لابد ان اقوله:
التكمله جيده ولكن للاسف فيها اخطاء املائيه كثيره بالاضافه ان زمن القصه ليس واضحآ حيث ان هناك خلط للازمنه في القصه.
ثانيآ الجهد وشكور والعتب مرفوع

[زهرة مكه]

لدي تكملة اخرى احب اشارك بها معاكم وهي:-a woman was crying and asking him to help her that a thief attacked her house and killed her husband while she was bleeding . The woman was his neighbour.