مساعدتكم في تصحيح حل إختباري

[S.o.M.a]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

زمآآن عن هذا المنتدى و هآ قد عدت بعد ان انتقلت الى المرحلة الجامعية

و محتاجة مساعدتكم الأستاذة أعطتنا Major Assignment Writing و عليه درجة كبيرة من المعدل

و هو عبارة عن 4 اسئلة

و قمت بحل السؤال الأول و هذا هو في الاسفل ارجو اذا كان في غلط تقولولي و لكم كل الشكر

و اذا حليت الثلاثة الاسئلة الباقية ان شاء الله راح انزله لكم هنا عشان تتأكدولي من حلي

اضغط على الصورة للتكبير و اذا مو واضح رفعته ع المرفقات

[M.o_o.N]

soma

حياك الله
بس ياريت تعيدي كتابه العبارات الانجليزية هنا بدون الصورة علشان نقدر نساعدك بصوره أفضل

[S.o.M.a]

هذا السؤال الأول و إجابتي باللون الاحمر

Part I. Study the picture below and read the description on how Brenda works in an office.Make any necessary corrections like grammatical errors and spelling mistakes you find in the passage:

_________

Office work

Brenda worked for a company which producis furniture.She works in an office, which is just opposite the factory where the furniture is make. This is how she spend her day:

She works at a computer most af the time, were she writes letters and reports.
She answers phone calls, mostly from retailers.
She made phone calls to retailers, and the factory making the furniture.
She sent invoices to costumers.
She shown visitors araond the factory.
She does general paperwork, e.g.filling reports, writing memos, ansering letters.
She arranged meetings for her boss and other managers in the company

الاجابات
worked >>> works
producis>>>produces
spend >>>> spent
made >>>> make
sent >>>> send
araond >>>> around
does >>> do
,ansering
>>>>
and answering
arranged >>>arrange

[M.o_o.N]

soma

إجاباتك صحيحه :)
لكن عندي تعقيب على كم فقرة

هذا السؤال الأول و إجابتي باللون الاحمر

Part I. Study the picture below and read the description on how Brenda works in an office.Make any necessary corrections like grammatical errors and spelling mistakes you find in the passage:

_________

Office work

Brenda worked for a company which producis furniture.She works in an office, which is just opposite the factory
where the furniture is make.

were the furniture is made

This is how she spends her day:

She works at a computer most af the time, were she writes letters and reports.
She answers phone calls, mostly from retailers.
She made phone calls to retailers, and the factory
which make the furniture.

She sent invoices to costumers.
She shown visitors araond the factory.
She does general paperwork, e.g.filling reports, writing memos, ansering letters.
She arranged meetings for her boss and other managers in the company
>>>>
and answering
arranged >>>arrange

هذا اللي انا شايفته صوبته بالوردي
ربنا يوفقك ^_^

[Petunia]

السلام عليكم اختي s.o.m.a

Rnoa

الله يجزاك الف خير اختي

معليش حبيبتي اسمحي لي عندي شويه تصحيح لاجاباتك

this is the answer


الاجابات بالاحمر

works

produces

spends

where she writes letters and reports

She makes phone calls to retailers, and the factory

sent<<sends

araond<<around

does

answering

arranges

ولاحظي بعض الافعال منتهيه بــ S لانها في الزمن المضارع ولان she تعتبر third person
وبس وسلامتك بالتوفيق

[M.o_o.N]

pink-pen

يعطيكي العافية عسولة :)

[Petunia]

Renoa

الله يعافيك انتي العسل والله

^_^

[Lancaster]

أعدت الكتابة من وجهة نظري :) >>دوخنا البنت <<

Brenda works for a company which produces furniture. She works in an office, which is just opposite the factory, where the furniture is made. This is how she spends her day:

She works at a computer most of the time, where she writes letters and reports.
She answers phone calls, mostly from retailers.
She makes phone calls to retailers, and the factory making the furniture.
She sends invoices to costumers.
She shows visitors around the factory.
She does general paperwork, e.g. filling reports, writing memos, and answeringletters.
She arranges meetings for her boss and other managers in the company.

[Lancaster]

تقريبا نفس اجابة بنك :)

[M.o_o.N]

lancaster

تسلمي يا قمر :)

[S.o.M.a]

جزاك الله خير أختي lancaster

لا بالعكس كل شي صار واضح كنت متلخبطة

ايه نفس الاجابات

بس الفرق انك نبهتيني على كلمة shows ما انتبهت له من اول

She shows visitors around the factory.

بارك الله فيكٍ

و إن شاء الله أنه هو الاجابة الصحيحة لانه طلعت 10 أخطأ و السؤال عليه 10 درجات

و ان شاء الله اليوم احل السؤال الثاني

إنتظروني

[Lancaster]

lancaster

تسلمي يا قمر :)

الله يسلمك يا ألبي

[Lancaster]

جزاك الله خير أختي lancaster

لا بالعكس كل شي صار واضح كنت متلخبطة

ايه نفس الاجابات

بس الفرق انك نبهتيني على كلمة shows ما انتبهت له من اول



بارك الله فيكٍ

و إن شاء الله أنه هو الاجابة الصحيحة لانه طلعت 10 أخطأ و السؤال عليه 10 درجات

و ان شاء الله اليوم احل السؤال الثاني

إنتظروني

والفاصلة بعد factory

[S.o.M.a]

السؤال الثاني
PartII. Degrees of comparison Using the language in the boxes below. complete the comparisons between the two couples as in the example

the language in the boxes
slightly
about
more/ less / fewer
exactly
a great deal
nearly
twice
half
five times
over
much /far
as much as
considerably
as many as

هذا جدول المعلومات

Martin | Fiona | Rupert | Rachel |............................
----------------------------------------------------------------
29 | 37 | 42 | 39 | ......................Age
----------------------------------------------------------------
65 | Height.................. | 77cm | 68cm | 76cm
----------------------------------------------------------------
59 | Weight .................| 96kg | 48kg | 75kg
---------------------------------------------------------------
3 | Working day......... | 9 hrs | 5.5 hrs | 6 hrs
------------------------------------------------------------------
8,0 | Annual income ......| 42,000$ | 16,500$ | 32,000$
----------------------------------------------------------------
1.5 | Exercise per week .| 1 hrs | 2 hrs | 4 hrs

AGE===>>Rachel is considerably younger than fiona /1

AGE===>>Martin is........Rupert /2

Weight===>>Fiona weighs........Martin /3

Weight===>>Martin weighs........Rupert /4

Height===>>Rupert is........Martin /5

Height===>>Fiona is.........Rachel /6

work===>>Martin works........Rachel /7

work===>>Fiona works........Rupert /8

income===>>Rachel earns........Fiona /9

income===>>Martin earns........Rachel /10

exercise===>>Rupert takes........Martin /11

exercise===>>Rachel takes........Fiona /12

أرجو ارسال الأجابات ع الخاص و لكم جزيل الشكر

[S.o.M.a]

هذا السؤال الثاني

و اجابتي في الاسفل باللون الازرق

AGE===>>Rachel is considerably younger than fiona /1

AGE===>>Martin is nearly older than Rupert /2

Weight===>>Fiona weighs less than Martin /3

Weight===>>Martin weighs more than Rupert /4

Height===>>Rupert is slightly shorter than Martin /5

Height===>>Fiona is considerably taller than Rachel /6

work===>>Martin works more than Rachel /7

work===>>Fiona works as many as Rupert /8

income===>>Rachel earns less than Fiona /9

income===>>Martin earns a great deal than Rachel /10

exercise===>>Rupert takes more than Martin /11

exercise===>>Rachel takes half than Fiona /12

بإنتظار تصحيحكم

[S.o.M.a]

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