thanks my dear.
for this emotional poem
I swore I'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
Still together forever.
I can't stand the silence,
I can't stand the tears,
I can't stand my life,
I can't stand these years.
You're my entire world,
I gave you my heart,
Hope you do the same,
Cause obsession is just my act.
My love couldn't be reached,
Couldn't be touched by any other,
You're all what I need,
No one instead no other.
You make me whole,
You fill my void,
You vivify my soul.
Why life is moving you!
To a distant place,
I'm torning apart,
Couldn't see your beautiful face.
I swore I'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
Still together forever.
Everyday I make a wish to die...
I try to fight off all the pain,
I shoot through every vein.
Months go and go,
And I only grow worse,
I can't accept what's happening,
This's love's curse.
I can't over take this,
I can't stand it anymore,
I put your picture everywhere,
I can't pass this door.
I walked into the woods,
Found a secluded place,
Kept thinking of the past.
Hours later he was found,
His body thrown on the ground,
And beside him they found,
Her picture in his hand.
On the back read his reason,
Why she took his life!
What she did to him!
It seemed he had loved her as it like.
Physically autopsy she didn't kill him,
Longing torn his soul apart,
It was obvious how it did,
It was caused of a suffering heart.
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة JuSt Me ; 01-01-2006 الساعة 01:01 AM
Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling
thanks my dear.
for this emotional poem
I swore I'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
Still together forever.
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة SuPeRLaRk ; 01-01-2006 الساعة 01:48 AM
.It is a lovely feeling you have
.It really touches my heart
,Dear brother JuSt Me
.Keep it up
.I hope to see more from you
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
Hi brother Just Me
This poem was so professional
Thanks aloooooooooot for sharing such
meaningful words with us
Keep on plz
ENJOY
Thanks a lot pals, appreciate your pass...
Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling
MANY many many of thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
it's soooooo great i like it much much
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I can't stand the silence,
I can't stand the tears,
I can't stand my life,
I can't stand these years
يـــارب رحمتــكـ
اللهم إحفظ أولادي
سبحان الله , الحمد لله , لا إله إلا الله والله أكـــــــــــبر
FIRST...AM SOOOOOO SORRY 4 BEING LATE 2 REPLY
SUPER....AMAZING.....STUNNING
LIKE USUAL....UR POEMS CAPTURE MY HEART
KEEP UP DEAR BROTHER
Dear tootalshaam and Al-ghaliah, I am so glad to see your posts here:D as well as you like my modest thought:o ...
Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling
Wonderful poery
Thank you for your choice
it's abeatiful poem
May Allah bless you
Just me
keep on
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