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الموضوع: A New Thought

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    انجليزي خبير
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    A New Thought

    I can't stand the silence,
    I can't stand the tears,
    I can't stand my life,
    I can't stand these years.

    You're my entire world,
    I gave you my heart,
    Hope you do the same,
    Cause obsession is just my act.

    My love couldn't be reached,
    Couldn't be touched by any other,
    You're all what I need,
    No one instead no other.

    You make me whole,
    You fill my void,
    You vivify my soul.

    Why life is moving you!
    To a distant place,
    I'm torning apart,
    Couldn't see your beautiful face.

    I swore I'd make it work,
    Vowed to stay together,
    Didn't care about the distance,
    Still together forever.

    Everyday I make a wish to die...
    I try to fight off all the pain,
    I shoot through every vein.

    Months go and go,
    And I only grow worse,
    I can't accept what's happening,
    This's love's curse.

    I can't over take this,
    I can't stand it anymore,
    I put your picture everywhere,
    I can't pass this door.

    I walked into the woods,
    Found a secluded place,
    Kept thinking of the past.

    Hours later he was found,
    His body thrown on the ground,
    And beside him they found,
    Her picture in his hand.

    On the back read his reason,
    Why she took his life!
    What she did to him!
    It seemed he had loved her as it like.

    Physically autopsy she didn't kill him,
    Longing torn his soul apart,
    It was obvious how it did,
    It was caused of a suffering heart.
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة JuSt Me ; 01-01-2006 الساعة 01:01 AM
    Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling

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    مميز الصورة الرمزية SuPeRLaRk
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    thanks my dear.
    for this emotional poem
    I swore I'd make it work,
    Vowed to stay together,
    Didn't care about the distance,
    Still together forever.
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة SuPeRLaRk ; 01-01-2006 الساعة 01:48 AM

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    انجليزي مبدع الصورة الرمزية Instigator
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    .It is a lovely feeling you have
    .It really touches my heart

    ,Dear brother JuSt Me
    .Keep it up
    .I hope to see more from you
    If things do not turn as we wish, we
    .should wish for them as they turn out

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية اسيــ حبه ــرة
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    Hi brother Just Me

    This poem was so professional

    Thanks aloooooooooot for sharing such

    meaningful words with us

    Keep on plz

    ENJOY

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    انجليزي خبير
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    Thanks a lot pals, appreciate your pass...
    Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية tootalshaam
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    MANY many many of thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    it's soooooo great i like it much much
    <
    >
    I can't stand the silence,
    I can't stand the tears,
    I can't stand my life,
    I can't stand these years
    يـــارب رحمتــكـ
    اللهم إحفظ أولادي
    سبحان الله , الحمد لله , لا إله إلا الله والله أكـــــــــــبر

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية الغاليه
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    FIRST...AM SOOOOOO SORRY 4 BEING LATE 2 REPLY


    SUPER....AMAZING.....STUNNING

    LIKE USUAL....UR POEMS CAPTURE MY HEART


    KEEP UP DEAR BROTHER







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    انجليزي خبير
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    Dear tootalshaam and Al-ghaliah, I am so glad to see your posts here:D as well as you like my modest thought:o ...
    Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling

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    المـدير الـعـام الصورة الرمزية DR AHLAIN
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    Wonderful poery

    Thank you for your choice















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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية زهرة وفى
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    it's abeatiful poem

    May Allah bless you

    Just me

    keep on

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