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الموضوع: Sentenced To Death

  1. #1
    شخصية بارزة
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    Apr 2007
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    In saudi Arabia ,where Peace and Justice exist,In the kingdom of Humanity
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    Sentenced To Death

    While sleeping in peace and putting all that heavy stuff of pain ,tears and gloom aside , I was woken up by a stranger . He never identified himself to me nor he did let me know at least what he wanted . I panicked and jumped up immediately to find myself eventually surrounded by rough soldiers .I couldn't resist them nor did I give up .
    I was taken away .
    Twenty-nine soldiers(as I was told lately by their boss ) were waiting !They were waiting for me to interrogate . Once I got there I tried to recall everything I did in my life .I felt then that every piece of me was shivering .I couldn't ease that fear I felt . However, I tried to calm myself down to get what was going on and why I was there. Many inquiries were running in my head but non straight answer was clear . The only thing I realized lately that I was sentenced to death.
    I was taken away .
    Before implementing the mission of execution the stranger showed up again ! and with him were the soldiers . The veil was taken off .
    Oh! I knew all of them . The stranger was my AGE and
    The twenty –ninth soldiers were my YEARS. They all gathered and interrogated me to see what was the suitable punishment I deserved for the mistakes I had committed in my life .
    I was sentenced to death.

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    انجليزي مشارك
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    Dec 2009
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    riyadh
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    رد: Sentenced To Death

    perfect

    Pacience Is A Virtue

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
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    Feb 2009
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    رد: Sentenced To Death

    Thanks so much . I liked the way of narrating . My comment is that
    You did not mention why was their verdict
    your death penalty . What were the seriuos mistakes that deserve death
    The language of the text is wonderful . God bless you

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    مميز
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    رد: Sentenced To Death

    I really enjoy reading

    My Allh bless you

    and protect u 2

    ^_^

  5. #5
    مميز الصورة الرمزية rose rani
    تاريخ التسجيل
    Jul 2008
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    somewhere
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    رد: Sentenced To Death

    as always

    I like your way of writing

    thank you so much brother for sharing us

    we are waiting for more

    because it has been so long time since
    your last topic here

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    انجليزي جديد
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    Thumbs up رد: Sentenced To Death

    what is the reason why they sentenced you to death? I wanna to know to take care .Nice story
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة صالح منصور ; 20-07-2010 الساعة 03:43 PM سبب آخر: punctuation

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