woooow
nice poem
I like it
thanks so much
I know ,that’s you know ,
It is the time
Yes, it is right time ,
to let your memory go
my love
since you have gone,
I have been wondering like a lonely soul
in your empty roads
searching for your laughters
for your white roses
For your own perfumes
for your ghost to show me the way
I know ,that’s you know ,
It is the time
to be alive again
to spread my wings and be free
to join the light dance
to hold my dreams
to be me
I know ,that’s you know ,
It is the time
To turn my head to the other side
To let your ship leave my shore
To watch our sun
Your sun
For the last time
ṡύɳ♥lϊɠɦṫ
اللهم اجعلنا نتنفس الرضـــا حبا ...حتى يشعر القلب بالأرتياح
woooow
nice poem
I like it
thanks so much
من جعل الحمد خاتمة النعم.... جعلها الله فاتحة المزيد
I have been wondering like a lonely soul
in your empty roads
searching for your laughters
for your white roses
For your own perfumes
for your ghost to show me the way
what a wonderful lines. It indeed touched a chord in my heart and I enjoyed a lot reading it Sis
Sun lightYou are the real Sun of this club and words cannot describe what an awesome poet and a great person you are
Keep it up dear
لأن
( الله ربي ) سأبحر في أُمنياتي ..
سأزيدُ رغباتي !
سَأطمع في دُعائي أكثر
..
لأن الله رَبي !..
سأطرُق البابَ وإن طال الفَتح
`سأنطَرِحُ على الأعتاب
وإن امتدّ الزمان ،
فحتماً ولابُد ;
سأبكي فرحاً يوماً من دَهشتي بالعطاء
Actually perfect pome
THANKS A LOT.
! Great
This is the best words I read today
^^
thanks a lot
يـارَبْ إذا أعطيتني مَالاً فلا تأخذ سَعادتي ...
وإذا أعَطيتني قوّة فلا تأخذ عّقليْ ...
وإذا أعَطيتني نجَاحاً فلا تأخذ تَواضعْي...
وإذا أعطيتني تواضعاً فلا تأخذ اعتزازي بِكرامتي...
very touching
Great job sis
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة :lost lady: ; 03-11-2010 الساعة 12:43 AM
Wonderful description indeed . I liked the setting .
Keep it up
ALthough it shows how painfull it is to leave ...but yet there between the lines there is hope....i really loved it .
Thanks for shairing such nice words with us.
you are a senstive soul indeed
May Allah reward you
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة :lost lady: ; 03-11-2010 الساعة 12:41 AM
.... ..goood
searching for your laughters
for your white roses
For your own perfumes
What a touching words you wrote
I loved your way in picturing it all
You have strong & a wonderful ability
to write about your feelings
in a warm and so deep way
Really Really
it is a wonderful topic sweetie
... it touched me deeply.... deeply..
as you have an amazing talent ...
i hope to see you more often
keep the wonderful job up and up and up ^^
سبحان الله وبحمده
سبحان الله العظيم
it is time to admit that
you have one of the most talented
people I have ever known dear
keep up
we are waiting for more
and more
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